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I love twilight so much!!! So when I saw this story I was so excited!! My two fav together!! Your writing is great. Descriptive and easy to understand!. I am enjoying it very much! Looking foward to the next chapter... where harry and edward will meet??? :)

update soon

Very interesting! :) I hope to see more of it sometime. Here is my e-mail address since AFF sometimes hides it: tainted_love214@yahoo.com. I'd like to receive updates on the story, please! I like your writing. The story is flowing smoothly, though I can't wait until the Cullens make an appearance!

wonderful start......im so excited to read whats going to happen next....keep up the hard work :)

I like the build up so far and I'm itching to see how things turn out. I'm particularly curious to see what you do with the wolves of Forks and if you make them a large part at all. I'm also curious as to when exactly in the Twilight timeline are the HP group coming in? I'm not to picky about timeline but I also get confused easily by it during crossovers. If all else fails I'll shug and go with it though, so no worries! ^^ Update soon and add me to your update mailing list please!
Email: LuvinShadows@gmail.com

I can't wait to read more! Will Sirius reappear in this story? I just can't wait for them to go to washigton!!

Just re reading this. I hope we get more soon.

Thank you for the nice long chapter! Um, but are you using a beta? I ask only because, although the vast majority of this has perfect punctuation and grammar, I have noticed a few mistakes that I'm pretty sure a beta would pick up on. For instance, "Sound's like..." should be "Sounds like" (I think that was Bill talking). Cause the former means "Sound is like" which I don't think is what you mean. Anyway, there are a few others, including in the first chapter, but it's nothing major. I loved seeing things from Neville's POV; sometimes writers forget that Harry and/or his spouse aren't the only ones with problems. It gives the story some credibility. Plus Neville is just so lovely! And Harry isn't overdramatic either -- more brownie points for you. :D I can't wait for things to unfold even further! Thank you for the email notifiying me of the update.

~Kati-chan

this is a good and awesome fic. keep going with your work!

laters! ~_^

miko