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April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really love your story so far!!!! your plot is really interesting!!! i really liked how you made things more realistic and i liked how harry handled his former friends!! i am really looking forward to your next chapter, keep up the great work!!!!!
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the showdown at #12. Love the way you write, and look forward to what you say about Dumbles reaction as well as the Weasleys. Or for that matter, their reactions to the news announcement. Hope to see an update soon.
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March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is very interesting...let's see where it's headed.
I would also suggest getting a beta for small grammar errors and maybe sentence structuring.
But again, it's just my opinion.
I would also suggest getting a beta for small grammar errors and maybe sentence structuring.
But again, it's just my opinion.
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March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I kind of hate that Harry and Voldemort still have to be enemies, although they clearly do if Voldemort is still planning to let Bella at the Longbottoms, among other things. It's just that he and Snape are so great together!
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March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying the story and I find it interesting how everyone just forgets what the damage they caused. I do hope that Bella gets her just rewards before she causes anymore harm. I do hope that Harry and his family will make it out of the country before they get hurt. I do hate it when everyone goes behind everyones elses backs to get what they want. Please continue for I am hooked
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March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love a vengeful harry. please if you could email me when you update i would appreciate it.
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March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg, i can't wait for the next chapter!
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March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story!!! I hope you continue soon! :)
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March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very good story so far. I really like your writing style.
Keep going!
Keep going!
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March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story!!! Please update again soon.