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Hi, I just left you a message at HPfandom... of course, it was only after that I found out you also post here.

Well, there is a fic that is VERY similar to yours (only three chapters so far and in desperately need of a beta) and I thought you should know.

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Please include "I make no money from this" on your disclaimer so this story isn't pulled. I am delighting in your story and look forward to more. Thanks for writing this.

I love you story first one I've come across with such long chapter and well done plot. Can't wait for the next chapter, take your time no rush have a nice Easter!

I just found this story and have been enjoying myself thouroughly in every chapter. All the bashing is a bit hard to take, but as you said, it's your plot and some things are important to make it go a certain way. And, yes, the Voldie/Snape pairing is also hard to envision. I just can't see Snape being all lovey-dovey with ol' Snake Face...but I'll go with the flow. I'm glad that they are not the focus of the story.

Yay Harry! Don't let those sycofants and betrayers knock you down. Walk tall and take your rightful place in the world. 'Aunt' Augusta better watch his back amoung High Society gathering; words can draw blood and kill one's reputaion and standing. I've read a lot of regency romances when I was younger and totally understand how that game is played.

The chapters are well written and thought-out. Please continue.

I love your story it is so interesting cant wait to read more.Hope you update soon.

I just loved the scene at #12. The kids getting into a fight only means that the adults were afraid to get into it because they still have hopes of getting Harry to forgive and be under their control again. They of course would not act like children. I believe Harry could actually call in the aurors as the order was the ones who threw the first real hex, (I don't consider the silence charm thrown at Molly a hex) and in Harry's own house. I do believe they forgot it was Harry's house and not theirs, just like they forgot they had been actually stealing from Harry for so long too. Great Chapter.

That was so...AMAZING!!
I feel a bit bad for Harry, because everyone is out for his fortune. And I hope the Wischard family gets thrown on thier asses! I think Luna would hex anyone for trying to steal her man..*laughs evilly* I can't wait to see that XD.
I aslo can't wait to formally meet the OC who Harry will be with! KYAA! I hope he has a bitchin name and a soul piercing stare that melts you from inside out!! MWUAHAHA!!
Lol, I've been reading to many fanfics XD
Anyway I can't wait for the next chapter.

I wouldn't mind seeing Harry take the moral high ground a little more than he has been. I'm not saying he should bite the bullet and forgive anyone - no way! - but some of his actions lately have seemed kind of petty.

Another great chapter!

I love how you kicked the order out!

I JUST HOPE THAT THE REST OF HARRY'S FAMILY IS NOT LIKE THE WISCHARDS I HATE THEM ALREADY!

For some reason, as soon as I read Harry's reaction to Leon, I think he is the OC Harry will date. Am I right? Then again, don't tell me, it'll be better to be surprised. :)

It's a great story, good enough for me to bother to review. I NEVER review stories. Which is probably a bad thing, but as I am currently reviewing your story, it's deffinitly a compliment to the story and your writing.

Although there is a few grammar mistakes, I think you did a GREAT job. I know how tough school life can be, and I'm impressed at how you managed to write over 13.000 words. Personally, I never manage to write more than maybe a few thousands.

As I said, great story! Do update soon. Please?