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Chapter 12 please! Will Harry join the Dark Side. Right now he has a lot of enemies and a lot of people who would use him up! Soooo can't wait to see how this plays out! What is the pairing?

um, i like the story, it does feel drawn out though. oh why is harry not getting any action? you've got his relatives getting some. HELL even Snape and Moldy-voldy are getting some. you've mentioned that harry is gay but you haven't even gotten anywhere close to letting Harry have a relationship. when will you let harry begin to be happy?

Wow! I love this story, no joke! For some reason I seem to enjoy the stories where Harry is betrayed by his "friends". I have never read a betrayal fic where the twins did the same as the rest of the family but I actually like it!:D I also love the way you go so in depth in explaining everything instead of just grazing over stuff. I think that makes for a better story all-together. I cannot wait to see what else happens in this fic! I'm so excited to find out who Harry is going to be with!!!!
PS I love the relationship between Severus and Tom :D

i like the intricate ways of this fic, its interesting and it keeps us thinking, i cant wait to see who is this OMC, and what is going to happend to voldey since he is married and in love and in the fanfiction world that means he is going to have a "happy ending".. or a tragic but beautiful one, lol.. well, do you have a mailing alert lisr? if you have could you add me? my mail is zer0one_oz@yahoo.com

OMG! Looove this story! It's awesome! So many interesting details.

I found, after starting to read the chapter, that I had to go back and read previous chapters before I could continue. Not because you haven't posted for a while, but because the detail you put in your story is extrordinary. Whether it is truth, fiction ,canon or not, the detail is well thought out and very interesting and makes the story more enjoyable to read. Also, the side stories make the main story more believable and gives depth and personality even to the original characters, something that is rare in fictions. I believe sometimes an author wants to move the story faster and leaves out these details to get the chapter done and out and that can be a good thing but I'm really enjoying the effort you are putting into this story. It was certainly worth the wait. I raise my glass of ice tea to you for a wonderful story.

Wonderful story. Can't wait to read the next installment even if it is another month. I love that you write nice long juice chapter.

Nice research and delivery of the story. I'll be watching for more. I truly hope that Harry doesn't get caught up romantically with the offspring of that ass of a grandfather or whatever that ditched his grandfather and mother.

I noticed a couple other reviews mentioning "Revenge a Dish Best Served Cold" by Raven102. I looked it up on FF.N and it looks like Raven102 is Guardian of the Phoenix, whom I believe you had plagiarism issues with before. It looks like He/She may be trying to rewrite, but a lot of it still looks the same in the 3 chapters that are posted here and on FF.N.

I love this story! - but there is one called "Revenge is a dish best served cold" by Raven102 that is VERY similar to this one. Same plot, same sentences (sometimes), not very well written. It's TOO similar, you should check it out.