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for Deliver Me

by Ann10550

person Elvendragon23
schedule June 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I am very sad to see that such a well written story has all but disappeared I hope that you return to complete your work that has sat here for so long
person Emma Pressnell
schedule February 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow what a fantastic fanfic!
person Emma Pressnell
schedule February 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow what a fantastic fanfic!
schedule June 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
good start
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Is there more?
schedule August 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!
schedule August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this! Thanks for sharing.
person Koizumi_Romi
schedule June 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
First off: let me say that as I started reading the first chapters of this story, I was listening to The Prince of Egypt Soundtrack; specifically, the song 'Deliver Us'. When I realized it, it made me laugh.
Secondly: you got a bit of the French wrong. Instead of 'qu'est ce' which means 'what is' (or it would, if you added 'que' to the end) it should be 'quelle', meaning 'what'.
Thirdly: I absolutely adore this story. Please update soon, and I can't wait to meet Harry's love interest, as well as see the assholes (Weasleys, Dumbledore, et cetera) bashed. I think that the best way to punish them would be to have them realize exactly what they did and how it was wrong
person yngoldfogee
schedule October 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It's such a promising story and really holds one's interest even with all the information you include.

Have you had to drop this? I hope not as I would love to see the end of your story with - hopefully - Harry come out on top over those who have tried/succeeded in doing the wrong thing by him and with them having to face up to the consequences of their actions no matter how they tried to trivialise them.
schedule June 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please update soon great story I know this sounds bad I would love for poor Severus to have a child with marvolo hey everyones needs happiness even if the dude is psycho of course Poor harry needs love too they both are rather sad so give them so happiness I say the weasley and all those other that hurt harry I can't wait till there come uppence........