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for A Series of Connecting the Dots

by Digitallace

schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 7!!! What will Draco do now?
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SO need chapter 7!!!!!!!!
This story is SO well written
I just cant get enough of it! ever!
You guys have made such a success of this challenge
and Im having a blast reading it.
Harry and Draco blend perfectly in this
twisted dance of manipulation.
PLEASE update soon!
schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
damn! i can't really say anything else except i want more!
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sooooo need chapter 7!!!
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AH! This story is so AMAZING lol
I cant get enough, you guys are perfectly balanced
and totally unpredictable.
With them minipulating each other
and the forced friendship and of course the desire lol
this has unlimited potential.
GREAT JOB LADIES!!!!!!!!!!
I cant wait to see what happens next
update soon!!! pretty please Im so addicted!!!
person Alyssa
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Nice job again! Amazing!!
I'm still keeping up with your stories...
schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hmm i think draco should grab harry and molest him against the nearest wall but hey that's just me lol
schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sooooooo need chapter 6!!!
person delyn
schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying your story, I think you're developing the characters well. I do think it would be more effective to not re-hash the same seen from different points of view. It pulls a story down needlessly. The same effect could be gained from a few sentences on one character's reaction as they think back on their last interaction, then get on with the next event. I only offer this advice because I think your story has much potential.
person tiggator
schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm definitely enjoying it. :) How clever for the two of you to write something like this! I love it. Keep up the great work. Always love your stories.