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person Desi
schedule March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is different from others because even though there's a SS/HG relationship there really isn't one, If you get my point.

but I would like to read more and see where it leads to

>>Desi<<
person Tallis37
schedule March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for adding to the ending, I cried so hard after finishing the first version. I'm pleased to see there is now hope for the two of them after all they've been through.
person KellyJCR
schedule March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you it actually feels finished now. Well done!!!!
person neelix
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am really glad you decided to continue this. Apart from a couple of typos, the story is great!
person Izzie
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O I'm so glad you continue! I can't wait for the confrontation with Hermione:)
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for continuing this! I'm so anxious to see what Severus says to Hermione, please update soon!
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello. I like these snippets and I look forward to more soon. Thank you.
person Izzie
schedule February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You HAVE to continue this. Please, make it a long story!!! Honestly the idea is grant...
person KellyJCR
schedule February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for contimuing this story. I thought for sure you were going to leave it as a oneshot but, I am thrilled you are going to take it further. It seemed to me right when you got to the juicy part it ended. I am looking forward to more after all how do you close a chapter of your life that you started 20 years ago. Even more how do you stop living a way of life that you chose as penance. Well done!!!
schedule February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Even though your intro says that the story is completed, I cannot see the second chapter being the end. It just does not work somehow. Please wrap tis story up in a way that makes sense; in a way that gives it some kind of conclusion - for better or for worse (but hopefully for the better).
Great writing!