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Great updates. It is moving a little bit quickly, I think, but that's your prerogative, haha. Love it though, and hopefully when she's out of the dungeon hot sex with ensue. :D

Happy writing.

~Charlie

I like it actually. It does seem a bit rushed but whose to say that Draco wouldn't act that way. Especially if he was particularly fed up. I mean the poor boy has Death Eaters in his house. I would be disgusted too. I can't wait to read more of the story. Keep up the good work.

draco is hiding things well. hmm, I think this might make for an excellent opportunity to stupefy, stun or (gulp) Avada said death eaters and make a made dash!

Do you really want to know what my thoughts are? Well they are....get more up! It's been a while since you updated this and I want more! Gimme!

wow i like this a lot.... this first chap is written really well... it has depth i mean you can read other fics that are similar and the parts with hermione as a prisoner is rushed or the parts with the torture is graphic... but you have stuck to the heart of the story which is draco and hermione.... we get to see who draco is and what he is starting become through his visits to hermione....

oh wow i love this chap while we got a glimpse of dracos intentions from the first chap we really get to see his thoughts in this.... great job you wrote this chap soooo well..... i love this fic!!!!

omg whata powerful chap.... hermione decided that she was not going to let them just make her another victim if or when they kill her she is not going to let them have the satisfaction of knowing that they got to her without a fight, and draco what a powerful moment i could feel his dispare in that moment at the end of the chap... that quote was extremely moving.... ok so on to chap 4

i liked this chap.... you wrote dracos thoughts very well... of course he would doubt at first this is a huge change for him and then getting to read how he eventually comes up with was fab and i liked his ideas i was think ing polyjuice but how would he create a potion that took a month..... i liked reading his and herrmiones conversation and i think that her telling him that she trusted him to get her out was important for him to hear.... i can not wait to read the next chap i wonder if you will have him accompany the death eaters that are on their way to torture her

I love how Hermione came back to herself, can't wait for the next chapter

Wonderful chapter (as always). And I LOVE the quote at the end - that was beautiful. :)