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February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fascinating situation these two found themselves in. I think this will be a favorite story. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
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February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved your second chapter. So glad to see that you updated so quickly. Hey, I don't know anything about ninjas either, so what ever you write will be fine with me. I just love a good plot, and yours is shaping up quite finely. Love the vunerability you are showing in your two main characters. Love that the healer is trying to help with more than just healing. Maybe Hermione should have a bad dream that wakes Snape up, and he will have to comfort her.... Keep up the good work.
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February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is great. I look forward to reading more.
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February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooooooo i'm very very intrigued! more more more!!! =]
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February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this kept me riveted to the screen. Ninjas? Will be looking forward to see how they fit into the english wizarding world. Please update very soon!
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February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a great beginning xxx
It is a type of fic that I can honestly say I have never read before..so please add more to it xxx
It is a type of fic that I can honestly say I have never read before..so please add more to it xxx
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February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it!
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February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting start. I look forward to more soon. Thank you. HG4eva
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February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great start! You are very good at descriptions without letting them overwhelm your story :)
The terse dialogue is perfect.
The terse dialogue is perfect.
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February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh fantastic. This has all the makings of a really great story. And the plotline isn't the best part, your storytelling skills are excellent. I love your writing style.