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March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Bravo, Bravo, Encore! Clapping and whistling heard in the background...
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March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on a job VERY well done. That was a mesmerizing story start to finish and I enjoyed every word. Thank you!
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March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a very exciting, thriller story with hopefully a romance blooming in the wings.
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March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Beautiful!* That was the most beautiful fight scene I have ever .... I was going to write, "have ever read," but honestly, I feel as though I **witnessed** it.
Excellent. I look forward to Chapter 5. Thank you for sharing your remarkable talent with the rest of us. I really enjoy the originality of the second-dimensional theory.
Cheers
CB
Excellent. I look forward to Chapter 5. Thank you for sharing your remarkable talent with the rest of us. I really enjoy the originality of the second-dimensional theory.
Cheers
CB
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March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Review and tell me how you feel??? It's bloody brilliant, but I think you already know that. You're keeping it at five...sigh. Well, you can't knock a girl for trying. I can't remember being this excited about a fic in a long time. It's fresh. The action is good. It's got lovely angsty tension. And it's so well written. I can't wait for the final installment.
The moment when she pulled out Bella's wand was very poignant for me. That was a nice touch.
The moment when she pulled out Bella's wand was very poignant for me. That was a nice touch.
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March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh man how cool is this fic? I loved the first four chappies and I lookforward to reading the next four! Please email me at ratscentral@hotmail.com when you add the next and future chappies!
Well done!
Well done!
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March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was wonderful. I am a bit upset you killed all the aurors and the healer (I was fond of them and their comradarie). That being said the attack was well written and very exciting to read. I can see the relationship starting to poke its head in soon and just in the nick of time it seems. You really have a great handle on Severus and his changes in his attitude since the war. You write him beautifully. Can't wait for the conclusion. Well done!!!!
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March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was brillaint, really dramatic! And she kissed him finally... well his hand anyway! It's a start, right??
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March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is sooo good
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March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more.