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for Markings of an Inmate

by AydenDenise

schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First of all the fact that Draco didn't recognize Tonks and just decided to call her Pinkie is absolutely hilarious! I love the name. Second, YAY the curse is lifted but BOO those damn guards are a bunch of meanies! Third, Draco and Hermione got some pain free action which was a nice little change. I love this story, and I am always looking out for your updates. Great story so far but please tell me that Hermione and Draco will get some full action without being interrupted sometime soon because the tension is killing me!!!
person Audrey
schedule May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!! PLEASE PLEASE keep writing I can't wait to read more
person edit
schedule April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think you have an interesting idea for a story, but it's so hard to read with all of the spelling / grammatical errors :( You still have a lot of proofing to do.
schedule April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the realness of this chapter. The scene between Harry and Draco was filled with such lovely stillness and quiet. In the midst are these two boys that were once nemesis coming together for the sake of one girl they both care about.

Just lovely.
person OUFAN
schedule April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love love love this story. Can't wait for the next update.
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved Harry's explanation and their talk in general. I absolutely adore your Ginny and your Blaise. And, it cracks me up that Draco is supposedly so smart, but can't figure out what those "strange" feelings are. LMAO Now, I'm only a bit worried about those 3 sets of eyes...

Thanks, hon! HG4eva
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very informative, for Draco's end or POV, but I still have questions on his probation terms. Do you plan to tell us soon in like confessions from Hermione on what happened with Ron and Draco in Azkaban.. They need to heal...LOL Keep them coming so I can R&R...
schedule March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chappie came out beautfully and I just really loved that ending. It left us with the promise of so much more. Draco is really working on re-building that lost confidence and working on finding who he is. He is making his own path and its such a joy to see him on the way to become a man worthy of note and character.

You know some authors take weeks to post in between chapters - its the writing process after all so don't worry. :-)

You know that was a great suggestion: you should post this on GE and you should get live journal acct - you would love some of the writers on my friends-list. Till the next chappie doll face! :-)
person ace
schedule March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok, i was just wondering, because i knew i had seen this before, this story is worth the wait anyway.
schedule March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was beautiful especially Ron's ass kicked, Love it.... Keep them coming this is getting better and better.. Lourdes