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for The Three Of Them

by SnuggleErika

schedule August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am gonna give an honest review, I hate the plot, Cedric is one of my most hated characters out of the Harry Potter series and I will not state why. The plot doesn't flow all that well and you need to not to bunch up the chapters and make them more spaced and a lot more paragraphs.