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This is interesting! Beyond the potential smut, I mean. I like the unusual format you are using, and the individual stories line up nicely within your framework of the 'girl's night out' councils of war. Pluasible, if slightly OOC, but again, they work well within your internal frame. More, when you can, please.

This is interesting, and a great start. I like the relationship dynamics between the girls, but one small thing confuses me. At the beginning of the chapter you mention Hermione is living at Spinner's End. Is there a reason this is taking place at Severus' house? Is that part of the plot? Because I didn't get the impression she was living with him and the girls seemed shocked by the revelation.