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February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a grea story. I look forward to reading more.
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February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful work xxxx
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February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice start, I just finished Chapter 1. Inoticed you had Hermione's house situated in Spinner's End.
If I recall that is the same low class, dismal, industrial neighboorhood that the books list as Severus Snape's
home (or boyhood home)... why would Hermione be in such a location?
If I recall that is the same low class, dismal, industrial neighboorhood that the books list as Severus Snape's
home (or boyhood home)... why would Hermione be in such a location?
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February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just finished Chapter 2 and found the answer to my question in my previous review.
"It was even Severus who mentioned the house on spinners end that had gone up for sale."
(Spinner's End should probably be capitalized though since it is a specific place name)
I like the progression you are making with couples; that potion idea was just wicked! :)
"It was even Severus who mentioned the house on spinners end that had gone up for sale."
(Spinner's End should probably be capitalized though since it is a specific place name)
I like the progression you are making with couples; that potion idea was just wicked! :)
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February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh dear!! Never give up..never surrender xx (Coincedently an Alan Rickman film)
Please add more to this great story xx
Please add more to this great story xx
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February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!!! Hell i love ALL of your stories. Update soon please. And keep the great ideas coming.
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February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great i love it .. man .. how is ginny, pasny and mione going to get their guy to come with them and how will luna get her to see she likes him .. please please update soon .. later for now
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February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story so far, I just love it when the girls knows what they wants and goes for it:-)) It is a bit sad that the men they have put their eyes on are rather daft, but one can always hope said men will get their act together before the girls realise how daft they are and moves on to more receptive candidates for their affection...:-))
I look forward to read more!
I look forward to read more!
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February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is great, more please.