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for The Hunt

by ronsmistress

schedule February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story i can't wait for the next update. One comment though in the last chapter in the last letter set between ron and pansy, you forgot to change to "my" syntax for pansy and "your" for ron's reply. keep up the good work.
person Anon
schedule February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter...thanks for using my idea xxx

Now we get into the Snamione goodness xxx

Please make it lemony xxx
person LisaJean
schedule February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
While I'm glad that you will be focusing on Severus and Hermione, I think it would be a mistake to completely drop the other couples. It would be good to have a few updates on them either through alternating chapters or even a girls night every few chapters.
schedule February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8 was brillant

I think you should have Harry at the ball so he can see how happy all his friends are and what he missed out on xxx

Please add more to this fantastic story xx
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.