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for Charming Hermione

by MariaTeresaQuintanar

person Mia
schedule December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just read this again because I couldn't clearly recall the details. I was so pleasantly sweet and quirky to relive. I love your takes and twists.

~Mia
person Anon
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Funny and sweet - great combo. :)
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM

I love humor in a story and there is so little available, especially done well. This was charming, funny, believable, and very romantic. You had me going there, with Lucius being the first trying to win Hermione and being ignored. I should have known better. How could anyone ignore Lucius begging one to marry him? Impossible.

Clever and very well written. Thanks for a great one-shot.

person Darkephoenix
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was very sweet, indeed charming and very romantic. I'm so glad someone remembers what romance is instead of just smut. (Not that smut is an all together bad thing but it just gets to be a little much sometimes) Beautifully done.
person Mia
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Every bit its title. I loved the deception. I loved the twists and reality you created so succinctly with each character. No one couuld have done it prettier or more efficiently. It would have taken any other author three miles of angst to make the same point as validly as you did in less than a chapter. One of the many reasons that I love your work. Thank you for this.

~Mia
person Rosamund
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was fun! Write more!
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a beautiful fic..what would tie it off beautifully??

Everyone finding out the truth about them xxxx
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful story, I loved how you made us wonder for quite a while on why she wasn't saying yes to Lucius when he proposed in her office:-))
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so cute...I noticed she didn't say no to Lucius when he begged her and thought to myself "well that's interesting." very very cute.
person kazfeist
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was charming! Only comment: it's spelled "jurisprudence". I was a practicing trial attorney for ten years, before becoming a mom and popping out babies. :D