rate_review Reviews

Fucking hell. You sure know how to write malfoycest. Haven't cum so hard for ages, that is one good story.

This was really well written, aside from an obscene overuse of the word "androgynous."

Absolutely wonderful, a delight to read and a story I'll read more than once (:

Oh hot damn. This is very good. I approve.

for Yrael_Nix:

Ah, thank you very much. *bows*

(Again, I am not going to review my own story but ...I want an "Answer Review"-button!)

(I. Am. Still. Not. Going. To. Review. My. Own. Story. I just feel that if people take time to give me a review, I am rather impolite if I don't answer.)

For Valo:

Yay, concrit! I really appreciate.

1. I am very happy that you liked the story. Thank you.

2. "Androgynous" ...yeah, there might be too much of it. I am constantly trying to expand my vocabulary to gain more repertoire to fawn over Lucius and Draco all the fucking time. Also I guess I have changed my style of fawning to more concentrated intense fawning over Lucius and Draco in fewer scenes instead of constant low-lever fawning or at least it is one of my goals when I write Malfoycest. ("Androgynous" is part of fawning because of my own sexual preferences when males are concerned.)

3. Italics. Yes, I have received quite a lot criticism about my overuse of italics and I have seen the error in my ways, so there will be less italics. (My latest fics have been R-rated with not much pr0n so I haven't posted these here but only in my LJ and IJ.) I think my italics use has quite a lot to do with the fact that English is not my native language, so I have been unable to understand that people are able to see strong emphasis on particular words without me pointing them out with big posters with text "HERE!":)

it was a nice read. :]

The only thing that irked me a bit was the overuse of "androgynous" when you described Draco-- easily overlooked, but it was nagging me in the back of my mind. Same problem with having too many words italicized.

xValo

For Catium:

Thank you very, very much! *my heart leaping with joy* Well, I am abso-fucking-lutely obsessed about Malfoycest (currently in process of writing my third Lucius/Draco combined with abusing Harry). Oh, and of course I want to write Lucius and Draco in-character, why ever choose to write fanfiction including any Malfoys without them being evil, manipulative, narcissistic, deceitful and perverted? I am always so happy when people like Malfoys as they are.


(To be honest, let's just say that I would really, really like to Cruciate every single one redeemed!Draco writer until they mend their ways ...the same goes with redeemed!Lucius too but happily Malfoy senior's personality is not usually raped by fanon.)

And I have to use a Finnish-English-Finnish word book rather often while writing fanfiction myself. Also, this fic would have been much worse without The Real Luciusmistress' patient and wonderful beta work. (Credits for ones that deserve them:))

Omg this was the fucking hottest malfoycest I've ever read. I am a huge fan of Draco/Lucius especially when they are together;) The kinky side of me loves them.
Brilliant.

And I also want to say your writing style is great, it really is a inspiration to every fanfiction writer that doesn't have english as first language. I am from Iceland (a fellow Scandinavian), and I am impressed by how good your english is. There were a lot of words in this fic that I had to look up because I didn't understand them and for me that is always fun, expanding my vocabulary. I love the way you write Draoc and Lucius I think it is totally in character so sarcastic, narcissist, evil...so Malfoy!!! Ahhh...!!!! Loved it! Ssssoooo hot...grrr... My favourite Malfoycest ever (and I've read a lot of them;)