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June 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
An interesting but definately fucked up story. But it was still interesting, keep up the good work... I'm surprised I haven't seen you write a Lily Potter fic yet with all your other HP fics that you have written.
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May 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha oh boy this was hilarious and retarded!
You said that you would portray rape in it's true horrid form yet what I see in this story is a fetishised version of rape, the sex scenes are described with great detail like smut. You made Cho into some hentai tentacle rape monster crossed over with the girl from The Grudge - a more racist portrayal of Cho I have never seen.
This looks like a massive porn parody rather than something disturbing. Why were the Slytherins breeding mud loose when they are supposed to be exterminated? The swelling of their bodies sounds like pregnancy fetish and we have enough of it on youporn.
You said that you would portray rape in it's true horrid form yet what I see in this story is a fetishised version of rape, the sex scenes are described with great detail like smut. You made Cho into some hentai tentacle rape monster crossed over with the girl from The Grudge - a more racist portrayal of Cho I have never seen.
This looks like a massive porn parody rather than something disturbing. Why were the Slytherins breeding mud loose when they are supposed to be exterminated? The swelling of their bodies sounds like pregnancy fetish and we have enough of it on youporn.
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September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I wonder that One Man isn't going to out to be Harry, taking his revenge on the girls and the slytherins....
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February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is just 'Wow'..
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February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think this is your best work yet, and also is Ginny dead?