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February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved, I wonder if there will be a sequel???
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January 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
very very well written! Would have preferred harry to be a little more vocal, and some more detail but other than that nice work!
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure how to put this without sounding repulsive or repulsed. This story has great potential to become a wonderful love story or a life of angsty torment for Harry. Guess it depends on how you want to view Luc. I have to say the idea presented of him raping Harry at any age does not appeal to me as rape scenarios are not all that thrilling (unless they are an acted out fantasy between a couple) but i found the writing tasteful and that Luc gave Harry even the smallest affections helpful to keep me from falling into a complete foul hatred for Luc right off the bat. Well done.
Secretly hoping for a love story ;)
Sev
Secretly hoping for a love story ;)
Sev
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So, I was reading stories and I thought to myself "I want a story where someone real cute gets abused real bad. I should check out Harry/Lucius..." And then I read your story. It completely hit the spot.
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March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wicked evil !!!!!!!
:P
poor harry the last line was heart breaking, kill the blond bastard whom i still love nonetheless!!!
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poor harry the last line was heart breaking, kill the blond bastard whom i still love nonetheless!!!
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February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good story!!!! how about a sequel!
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February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sick and twisted and totally pointless! Well written though!
Cheers!
Cheers!
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February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry.
You did a good job at showing both his defiance to authority figures and submissiveness when it comes to circumstances out of his control, and balancing them in a way that makes sense. I like how you put in the bit about the chocolate, giving Harry a way to possibly get his memory back on his own, and Lucius a way to torment him some more. This looks promising ^^ looking forward to the new chapter
You did a good job at showing both his defiance to authority figures and submissiveness when it comes to circumstances out of his control, and balancing them in a way that makes sense. I like how you put in the bit about the chocolate, giving Harry a way to possibly get his memory back on his own, and Lucius a way to torment him some more. This looks promising ^^ looking forward to the new chapter
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February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dhalim: Thanks! *running out of cookies and first-borns, hands over a bar of chocolate instead*
I'm SO glad you thought it worked! I was a bit worried I was making Harry a bit too submissive in the middle. But then again, no-one says no to Lucius :)
I'm totally in love with the chocolate-thing, even if it IS a bit AUish... Lucius is good at tormenting Har-I mean people XD
I'm SO glad you thought it worked! I was a bit worried I was making Harry a bit too submissive in the middle. But then again, no-one says no to Lucius :)
I'm totally in love with the chocolate-thing, even if it IS a bit AUish... Lucius is good at tormenting Har-I mean people XD
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February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
DTDY: Thank you! I'm very glad you liked :) *hands cookies (still not pink or heart-shaped)*
Lunicorn: Thank you SO much for your wonderful review! You totally made my day! My first-born will be yours if you want it :) It meant the world to me to hear you thought my writing is good. As for the angst, well, I sort of tried to find if there's anything that'll make me feel sorry for Harry. There's just something about him that screams "Target!" to me :) OK, I'm not entirely evil: I DID feel a little sorry for him at the beginning at least...
Mrs Figg is really not a central character in this, but since there seems to be some interest in her she might appear again later... We'll see :)
Yeah, the Obliviate-trick is getting kinda old, so YAY that you saw something original in mine!
Lunicorn: Thank you SO much for your wonderful review! You totally made my day! My first-born will be yours if you want it :) It meant the world to me to hear you thought my writing is good. As for the angst, well, I sort of tried to find if there's anything that'll make me feel sorry for Harry. There's just something about him that screams "Target!" to me :) OK, I'm not entirely evil: I DID feel a little sorry for him at the beginning at least...
Mrs Figg is really not a central character in this, but since there seems to be some interest in her she might appear again later... We'll see :)
Yeah, the Obliviate-trick is getting kinda old, so YAY that you saw something original in mine!