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Great story, I love the way Pansy and Millie are slowly breaking down Harry's defenses. I would love to see how it would continue. Unfortunately this hasn't been updated for a while...

Very disappointing that you seem to have abandoned this story. Harry munching creampies and getting his ass played with is hot as hell.
Here's hoping you'll continue it soon.

This is currently my favorite Harry Potter work-in-progess. I hope you still plan to update. Sub-Harry stories are a favorite of mine that very few write well.

I can't wait to see how Pansy and Millicent sexually/psychologically compromise our hero next. It seems as if they're trying to gradually condition him to being receptive to sex with men, but everyone is written so closely to canon that it's still hard to imagine Harry willingly being with Draco or Crabbe/Goyle.

Also: kudos for using sexuality to inform character. You're very adept at getting into the Slytherin machinations of Pansy's head. Harry's no match for a woman who can be so deliberately manipulative even in the middle of sex. It's great to see the differences in the way Pansy and Millicent operate, and it will be very interesting to see how Harry responds once they stop using the love/lust potion to influence him.

Sorry for the long review.

Wow, this is all so very hot and I absolutely love your Millie and Pansy in this. I can't wait for the next update and I hope we'll find out if Ginny really is up to something/someone.

The story has some good twists, though I am a bit curious to know if there's anything more to their breaking of Harry than just some really good sex.

Please update soon. :)

oh my... very hott. VERY hott indeed. i loved every second of this fic and cant wait to find out what happens next. god, it was like i was practically reading porn! wait, it was! hahahaha : )
hope to see what happens next very soon. i hope harry doesn't get hurt in this fic. i dont care who he ends up with, you'd probably make them sound perfect anyway.
i would have never thought that I'd support a harry/pansy or harry/millie or even a harry/romilda vane ever!
i hope to see new chapters soon. LURVE the sex! just dont hurt harry, k? he's absolutely adorable in this. makes me wish that he truly existed *pouts* looking forward to more!!!!!!

Good fic... pretty hot... but I'd like Romilda and Ginny to 'fight back' (maybe together... yumm!) and the plot of Patsy go wrong... Well... Patsy is not than smart, and a bit of chaos (and hot sex with it) is always welcome... They say, no plot withstand the contact with the enemy.

You have a wonderful story that is very, very hot. So, I hope you come out with another chapter soon! By the way Great job!

Alexi

That was an incredibly hot story. So much detail in there, and so well-written. Good job, man.

That took me all day to read, in between lawn work and shopping, but man, very, very hot. The girls were very good at wearing our poor boy hero out.

Great detail. I was a bit surprised at Harry's willingness to get out of his relationship w/ Ginny, but then your closing clued us in to why. Still, I think that even without the lipstick, Harry would have given in and tried to work out some "arrangement" for the future. He sure enjoyed himself.

Fun stuff.