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August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
'squeal' love your story, you portray their characters so well can't wait for more! hope the weasliete gets wots coming to her! long live fluffy-kuns!
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August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapter. Hope to see more soon.
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August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! its very interesting nad i really like harry potter and inuyasha crossovers :D im am also happy that you started spacing your peragraphs (i didnt want ot say anything before because i really do like this stroy and didnt want to offend you...but thank you for doing it now) its much easier to read now so thank you!! great job and i cant wait til the next update! keep up the good work and thanx for sharing! :D
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August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very hot!!!
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good and intersting story that you have also written quite well. I hope you'll have the time and motivation to continue with it.
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July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
PLease update soon. but I do have one question Are Rin, Shippo, Kanna, and the rest of the group coming to Join Harry? Or are they going back to join them?
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July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story!! This is definitely one of my favorite crossovers, I can't wait to read what happens next! XD
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July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please say i didn't find a dead fic. oh gods of literature please say that this wonderful crossover will continue to be updated and soon. as you can see i like the fic and hope you update soon. please say someone will kill or at least seriously maim kagome. i hated her in the anime and no fic has changed my mind yet. i actually like snape. shocking. flitwick always rules and i like the choices you made for harry's mates though i would have never of thought of naraku. i thought it was funny when ron said harry mated with a bunch of snakes. i laughed and comented to my computer screen that he didn't mate with a single snake but that he mated with a wolf, dog, and spider. if he wanted to mate a snake he would have to find orochimaru somehow. when i read that his detention with naraku i laughed my ass off due to ron being afraid of spiders. since i read the 12 chapters straight through i might of missed commenting on something so forgive me. this might be the first fic i have read with dumbledore as the bad guy. i love your creativity and hope that muse does not die anytime soon.
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness. That was a very interseting story. I did not see that one coming. please up date you midnight bloodline soon. I'm dying to see what happens next.
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June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
(Um, just to start off, please keep in mind that this is NOT A FLAME!!) Really! I just want to talk, because it made me think interesting things.
Love the fic; I adore the triple-mate thing.
Be careful about spelling though - it's 'deluded' not 'diluted' - to dilute something is to make it weaker - like diluting the strength of liquor by adding water or juice.
Also, I really am irrationally fond of maniuplative!Dumbledore and HarryGetsRevenge fics, but I generally prefer when people get what they deserve and not more. Some things, like approving thinking of Dursleys as 'animals' and Amelia thinking all muggles can be called 'animals' just for what the Dursleys did; murdering little boys because they bullied Harry when he was little, and literally subjecting Ron to torture are...um, touchy subjects? In part, I guarantee it's just me - I'm doing research on child abuse and bullying, and I really don't approve of harming children for anything - and if his mates and the wizards are all busy calling Harry a child, then Ron is one too - but some of it just seems needlessly cruel. I mean, the vampire could have just scared all the little boys out of hurting Harry, rather than, you know, eating them, and it's kind of important to note the humanity of the Dursleys, you know? They are humans who have done very evil things, but humans nonetheless. 'Humanity' is often used to emphasize kindness, but humans have just as much tendency toward cruelty as kindness; they just need the right incentive towards one or the other.
At any rate, I really am quite fond of this fic; I adore submissive Harry, I'm dying for him to get pregnant, and I can't wait for Ginny and Molly Weasleys' little dreams to be crushed. In addition, I thought it was a nice little spin for Mrs. Weasley to completely ignore the money Dumbledore gave her - very nice touch.
I would love it if you could e-mail me and notify me when you update! And please, please don't flame me. This was in no way a criticism of you or your writing skills; it was a critical review designed mainly to point out that 1) you can improve as an author if you improve your spelling, and 2) its important for authors to think about what they write - just like it's important for Ron to think before he opens his mouth. Writing produces ideas - and if the general theme of this fic is the idea you want to produce, then fine; it's not my responsibility to judge your morality - but it is important to think of what any repurcussions might be. For example, I NEVER write about religion, because my ideas are a little too radical to go over well. I try not to read fanfics promoting rape as a good thing, because it sends the wrong message, and people are stupid enough to buy the myths of 'willing' victims too much already. I just wanted to make the suggestion that you think before you write - but WRITE WHAT YOU WANT! Seriously, you don't need my approval to write something, and I don't want to insinuate that you do, but I did want to point out the idea...
Oh, never mind. You're probably going to flame me anyway, no matter how I try to explain this. Everyone does (the sad thing is, half of them are people whose fics I actually like!); but I thought I might as well try to explain what I meant before you exploded at me. Odds are, though, that you didn't even read this far and are even now writing angry messages to my e-mail calling me a nasty little b*** who can't appreciate good literature. Which will inevitably make me cry. *shrugs* I don't even know why I bother writing constructive criticism anymore...
I apologize, this turned into a rant...kind of.
At any rate, good luck with the fic, and please let me know when you update!! I can't wait to read more!
--tati1
Love the fic; I adore the triple-mate thing.
Be careful about spelling though - it's 'deluded' not 'diluted' - to dilute something is to make it weaker - like diluting the strength of liquor by adding water or juice.
Also, I really am irrationally fond of maniuplative!Dumbledore and HarryGetsRevenge fics, but I generally prefer when people get what they deserve and not more. Some things, like approving thinking of Dursleys as 'animals' and Amelia thinking all muggles can be called 'animals' just for what the Dursleys did; murdering little boys because they bullied Harry when he was little, and literally subjecting Ron to torture are...um, touchy subjects? In part, I guarantee it's just me - I'm doing research on child abuse and bullying, and I really don't approve of harming children for anything - and if his mates and the wizards are all busy calling Harry a child, then Ron is one too - but some of it just seems needlessly cruel. I mean, the vampire could have just scared all the little boys out of hurting Harry, rather than, you know, eating them, and it's kind of important to note the humanity of the Dursleys, you know? They are humans who have done very evil things, but humans nonetheless. 'Humanity' is often used to emphasize kindness, but humans have just as much tendency toward cruelty as kindness; they just need the right incentive towards one or the other.
At any rate, I really am quite fond of this fic; I adore submissive Harry, I'm dying for him to get pregnant, and I can't wait for Ginny and Molly Weasleys' little dreams to be crushed. In addition, I thought it was a nice little spin for Mrs. Weasley to completely ignore the money Dumbledore gave her - very nice touch.
I would love it if you could e-mail me and notify me when you update! And please, please don't flame me. This was in no way a criticism of you or your writing skills; it was a critical review designed mainly to point out that 1) you can improve as an author if you improve your spelling, and 2) its important for authors to think about what they write - just like it's important for Ron to think before he opens his mouth. Writing produces ideas - and if the general theme of this fic is the idea you want to produce, then fine; it's not my responsibility to judge your morality - but it is important to think of what any repurcussions might be. For example, I NEVER write about religion, because my ideas are a little too radical to go over well. I try not to read fanfics promoting rape as a good thing, because it sends the wrong message, and people are stupid enough to buy the myths of 'willing' victims too much already. I just wanted to make the suggestion that you think before you write - but WRITE WHAT YOU WANT! Seriously, you don't need my approval to write something, and I don't want to insinuate that you do, but I did want to point out the idea...
Oh, never mind. You're probably going to flame me anyway, no matter how I try to explain this. Everyone does (the sad thing is, half of them are people whose fics I actually like!); but I thought I might as well try to explain what I meant before you exploded at me. Odds are, though, that you didn't even read this far and are even now writing angry messages to my e-mail calling me a nasty little b*** who can't appreciate good literature. Which will inevitably make me cry. *shrugs* I don't even know why I bother writing constructive criticism anymore...
I apologize, this turned into a rant...kind of.
At any rate, good luck with the fic, and please let me know when you update!! I can't wait to read more!
--tati1