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May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I actully found this more funny than sexy, I laughted like hell, I think you got some really good writing. Easy to follow!
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February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
For gloria:
Thank you. *bows* I thought Draco was just.. umm... a bit manipulative... *evil smirk* but that's just matter of opinion.
Thank you. *bows* I thought Draco was just.. umm... a bit manipulative... *evil smirk* but that's just matter of opinion.
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February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow...draco is so fucking EVIL *shivers*...interesting idea though
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February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Myeh.... More characterization.
Your portrayl of Draco is so 1D, I can't even enjoy the smut. I mean, the password for everything is Pureblood? lol. Yes, because when you are rich and privilaged and a real character, there is only one thing ever on your mind: your heritage. Atleast remember that he likes potions and sports.
Your portrayl of Draco is so 1D, I can't even enjoy the smut. I mean, the password for everything is Pureblood? lol. Yes, because when you are rich and privilaged and a real character, there is only one thing ever on your mind: your heritage. Atleast remember that he likes potions and sports.
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February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really don't think there's anything I love more than a thoroughly debauched Colin Creevey. Well, maybe a thoroughly debauched Harry at the hands of Snape or one of the Malfoys. Anyway, love the story. It's a little more dialogue than I usually like, and it's broken up strangely, but it's written well. And the overall idea is just so believable. Can't wait to see what you come up with next.
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February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
(still not going to review my own story. got my italics there finally, though.)
for sparrowswing: Thank you very, very much. (Btw, Colin is not thoroughly debauched ...yet. Although I don't know when Draco has time to continue the process.) And yes, I will pay more attention to my paragraphs.
for sparrowswing: Thank you very, very much. (Btw, Colin is not thoroughly debauched ...yet. Although I don't know when Draco has time to continue the process.) And yes, I will pay more attention to my paragraphs.
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February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I just LOVED your story, even if a poor naive soul was used and tainted, I mean, wow Draco should win an Oscar for his performance!!!!!! I think it was a very real plot and you developed it in a great way, cause that is the way I think people lie to get into other people pants. Anyway, hopefully you will write about Lucius and Draco
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February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
(no, I am definitely not going to review my own fic but as it seems I can't answer otherwise...)
For Nikte: An abnormally large thank you! *bows* Your review was just so absolute delight for my day. (And tainting poor, naive souls is so very convenient Malfoy pastime...)
The sequel (containing, IMHO rather HAWT Malfoycest) is actually almost ready. (Needs just some re-writing and betaing).
For Nikte: An abnormally large thank you! *bows* Your review was just so absolute delight for my day. (And tainting poor, naive souls is so very convenient Malfoy pastime...)
The sequel (containing, IMHO rather HAWT Malfoycest) is actually almost ready. (Needs just some re-writing and betaing).
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February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, it