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by knj4k4

schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was an intense card game at the end.
BTW (petra-naturals) is supposed to be preternaturals. There's a site for all things Anita Blake (http://www.timber-wolf.net/blake/index.html)
person Jan
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting turn of events, it seems to me that this story is soon to turn into a threesome ^_^ Me like it LOL!

Please update chapter 14 soon ^_~

Jan
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have done a really good job of keeping Nathaniel and Asher in character. I love how you have Harry please write more soon.
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is very nice and interesting so far. I usually prefer one where Harry is the sub, but this is very well written and highly engaging. I also liked your characterization of Nathanial and Asher. GOOD JOB and WRITE MORE SOON!!
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is my generic review for great stories with sublime plot and imagination. I am suitably impressed.

P.S. I hate writing reviews. >.>

Ren Apple
person sanda
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it
person sanda
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person 261012
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love it
person Jan
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Harry is so mean... I like it! *chuckles*

Please update chapter 12 soon ^_^

Jan
person Jan
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I absolutely love it :D

Please update chapter 11 soon ^_^

Jan