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by knj4k4

schedule September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
London!! He would just look so cute with Harry and Nathaniel!
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I squee. that is about all that I can say. I adore your premise for the plot, understand that some of the characters are ooc, love the way that they are, and am waiting with inestimable glee for more. Here's to hoping that you update soon.
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gawd this story is GOOD! ^^ I know this is an unsatisfactory review for your sheer Brilliance, but it's 4 am and I'm tired. *yawns*
schedule June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You "command" me to review? I don't see any of your marks on ME!!
just kidding ;)
I liked the ritual. Can't wait for the Vamp Council to hit St.Louis.
Curious to see how it goes.
person sanda
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person ajgordon
schedule May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't normally read x-overs but all the warnings on this one made me reconsider just this once ;) I have no idea who Anita Blake is but I must say that fhis story is hot! Thank you for sharing. I'm up to Ch 12 but must go to sleep cause it's 2am. Can't wait to read more tommorrow.

With love, MeToo
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying your story. I think it is a wonderful betrayal of a true Dom/Sub relationship. So many authors either have no idea or don't care that this relationship extends far beyond the bedroom. I have to confess that I have never read the Anita Blake series. I was impressed with how easy this story was to follow, anyways. A definite kudos to you!

Update Soonish,
Cari Marie
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Could Harry bomb the British ministry?
schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay, Harry hasn't forgoten about cute little Natey at all!
person sanda
schedule May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good story