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for The Ultimatum

by linzeepinzee

schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow! very hot!
good job!
person kazfeist
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. I can see this expanding a bit, too. Draco's not going to let her go with just one taste....and it could turn into something more substantial. :D
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hot, hot, hot! Wow, good job! awesome oneshot
person Anon
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was hot lol
loved it.
wish there was more hehe
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I for one hope to see another chapter up before next week that was super sexed and awesome! That was a definite refreshing sex scene!
person Anon
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Is that what Hermione was making notes on, how to give head??? LMAO She really is a fast learner. Any chance you'll change your mind and tell us what happens in the library next week?? *evil grin*
person kittycat30
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was amazingly hot! I hope we get to see what happens next time...