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So, there's a plot within a plot! Hopefully, Hermione's not too bad off, with this latest development. :D

O_O

that jerk!

its so cool to see this poster here, i still have to reveiw over their on FFnet. I can't wiat for the next chapter, update soon. What did harry do? How is Hemrieon? Does everyone know about how he reacted to hearing the talks during breakfast. Where's ron, what's his take....

i love it and hope for more, please!!!!

you are definitely right I 've never come across a story like this one! I love the way Hermione just completely turned things around and now Draco is hooked =] Totally awesome. oh and his possessiveness really cute =]

Please update soon

Hi there! Came across this today and thought Id have a look. Not bad at all for a first time writer. Good plot, good writing. Id work on making the chapters a little longer and maybe have look back for some errors. Type-Os are expected without a professional editor, but there were a few "word errors" Like puncture instead of juncture etc. All in all though, its a good start! Ill have another look soon to see if you updated. =)


Happy Writing!
S_G

Oh what I'd give to be Draco's lab rat -sigh- lol .
Please update soon

wonderful!!!!!