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September 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying your story. It's well written and titillating. However, you have said "mute point" when you mean "moot point." (Sorry, I'm a grammar Nazi). :)
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December 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I personally preferred the ending you went with so good call there! I really enjoyed this story! The plot is unlike anything I've read before and the turn in Draco's character was believable--a big plus. I'm not sure I quite followed Lucius's change but whatever lol. There are some typos in the remaining chapters, just so you konw. Thanks for sharing! Keep writing and sharing the Dramione love!
Cheers,
SW
Cheers,
SW
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December 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Read the whole story in one setting. I enjoy the D & H's character evolution with all the plots and twists. I wish their spy life were written more in dialog style (the heavily-descriptive style used feels a bit out of place). Great job in starting with the intriguing violence-turned-love premise and finishing it!
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November 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's sooo wonderful to be raped! All people knows the racist rapist are good men... Honestly, I think I going to puke!
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November 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Boys, Now you know the best way to make any girl to fall in love with you! RAPE HER!!! 100% fail-safe!
ALL GIRLS FALL IN LOVE WITH THEIR RAPIST!!! They can say not, but the true is all girls want to be raped!!!
And if the rapist is a coward racist murderer, the better!!!... How romantic!
ALL GIRLS FALL IN LOVE WITH THEIR RAPIST!!! They can say not, but the true is all girls want to be raped!!!
And if the rapist is a coward racist murderer, the better!!!... How romantic!
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November 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. Please update, the story cannot end like this. And Draco does not die does he? I have so many questions that still need to be answered. Hope you see this review soon
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February 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yay, love it!!!! More please!!!!
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February 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how you did it but i hate non con smut where Hermione ends up enjoying herself because it seems so out of character not just for her but any woman. Yet you changed the circumstances and wrote out their emotions and the situation so well that I can accept it and not just skim through the rest of the story searching for when she finally gets her revenge if ever. In other words well done, now back to the story I'm only on chapter 4.
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September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapters one through four
Great story so far.
Well written--keep up the good work!
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Great story so far.
Well written--keep up the good work!
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September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter five
I love how Hermione has embraced and decided to explore the world of sensual delights with Draco. I also thought that it was fantastic that upon her hearing of his slipping grades she has cut him off of any pleasure until such time as his grades are back up to snuff.
Hermione is in the hospital wing? EEK! What happened? I can't wait to find out.
:D
Well done--keep up the good work!
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I love how Hermione has embraced and decided to explore the world of sensual delights with Draco. I also thought that it was fantastic that upon her hearing of his slipping grades she has cut him off of any pleasure until such time as his grades are back up to snuff.
Hermione is in the hospital wing? EEK! What happened? I can't wait to find out.
:D
Well done--keep up the good work!
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