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man this web site rules unlike those idiots in ff.net who has those stupid rules of this kind of stuff in stories I'm glad their some web sites that has no rules and allow since those idiots won't allow

I LOVE THIS! It is wonderfully done! The smut is hot and I just love Harry's naivety! It makes him both sexy and sweet. He seems to be a natural though...>.< Please keep writing!

Well, this is glorious. I love Harry in this story. So true to canon, yet you manage to make his newfound interests seem like the hidden side of his character that JK forgot to write about.

More than his "talents", I love how intelligently you've written this. Your introduction of logic is great without seeming beyond any of the characters. Even Harry's example of practiced applications in the Common Room spurring the students into following his lead is sowing the seeds for the DA. The air freshener charm was inspired. And Harry is such a pervy little bugger it's hard not to love him. I realize that Alicia is next on his list (and I loved his brazen flirting with her), but I can't help hoping that Harry does his uptight bff a favor and apply his newly learned techniques to her equally deserving snatch. After all, he owes her.

Great Story, one of the better erotic/smut stories that i've read

Good first chapter, many parts of it made me laugh, and I thought you got Harry's awkwardness down to a T

I'm glad you have a bit of a plot to the story rather than just smut and that you've added quite a bit of humor into it as well. Harry is so funny and such a little pervert!! lol. Great story so far, I'm looking forward to more!

I like this story. Its not a lot of plot, but enough to not make it PWP. :)

Please update soon! :)