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February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. I noticed Harry seems to be slightly Bi-curious, well whatever. It's not like you're having him suddenly fall in love with Voldemort and Snape. I wonder if Harry will realize the true usefullness of parseltongue? After all, in order to actually his like a snake, one has to make their tongue vibrate at a certain frequency and I'm sure there's many a witch who'd appreciate such effects.
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February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the story so far. It is by far one of the best written stories grammatically on the site that I have read. I also thoroughly enjoy the story and can't wait until you post more to see where it goes.
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February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha that last chapter was awesome! More please!
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February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
By the way, I really like how this story isn't just smut. You have also given it some depth and a plot is always good ^.^ Keep up the good work! I can't wait to see what will happen now and who he will eventually end up with..Although I'm leaning towards Katie here >.<
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February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter!!! Especially Ron's convo with Draco LOL
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February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*lol* Really, Draco? You deny you're a poufter, but not that your father bribed his way out of Azkaban? :P
Good story so far, keep it up! :)
Good story so far, keep it up! :)
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February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is great, a story with a plot that actuallky keeps me interested enough to read all of it. Also you seem to write fast, which is always a bonus. Hope to see more soon.
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February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story.
Very realistic compared to most of the other stories like this.
I also love how you have him taking care of his reputation in a way that actually makes sense.
Very realistic compared to most of the other stories like this.
I also love how you have him taking care of his reputation in a way that actually makes sense.
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February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww, and it started so well.
I'm not nearly as interested in Harry's PR campaign as a subplot. Be careful that you don't try and fix everything that's wrong in Harry's life. And just where did the idea of polygamy come from? Harry's a 14-year old boy sexually (and magically) experimenting with some flirtatious witches on his Quidditch team. When did it get serious? I can't believe that a young man in his position would be having these thoughts on a committed relationship with multiple partners already when he hasn't even had his first girlfriend. Fooling around and having fun, sure. I hope this won't become a Harry-Has-3-Girlfriends story. I have an easier time buying him being inquisitive and eager enough to work his way through a significant amount of the female population of Hogwarts while improving his "services", than becoming romantically involved with a group of them.
I loved that you gave Harry some bi-curiosity, but cleared up his sexuality without being discriminative. I particularly like your analogy of the candle and the sun.
Get back to the smut!
I'm not nearly as interested in Harry's PR campaign as a subplot. Be careful that you don't try and fix everything that's wrong in Harry's life. And just where did the idea of polygamy come from? Harry's a 14-year old boy sexually (and magically) experimenting with some flirtatious witches on his Quidditch team. When did it get serious? I can't believe that a young man in his position would be having these thoughts on a committed relationship with multiple partners already when he hasn't even had his first girlfriend. Fooling around and having fun, sure. I hope this won't become a Harry-Has-3-Girlfriends story. I have an easier time buying him being inquisitive and eager enough to work his way through a significant amount of the female population of Hogwarts while improving his "services", than becoming romantically involved with a group of them.
I loved that you gave Harry some bi-curiosity, but cleared up his sexuality without being discriminative. I particularly like your analogy of the candle and the sun.
Get back to the smut!
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February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and why the change in the outcome of the Second Task? When did Katie become the thing he'd "sorely miss"? When did Dumbledore ever believe the Daily Prophet?