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for I Saw Malfoy Suck Cock

by Smuff

person Nikte
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great chapter!!!!!!!!!!! It was so deep in so many ways, after all sex can be quite complicated when you mix it with too many emotions. You know, as much as I lust for your Harry, I love your Draco, he is so angsty I just want to hug him and protect him, do you think Harry would be jealous of poor old me? Hopefully he wouldn
person HazelWolf
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No sympathy votes here, but I am sorry about your Grandma. Write through the pain! ^_~

Good chapter. It was a little different, but it provided nice background information, interaction, and character development. I got the feeling that Draco was trying to tell Harry something when he said he wouldn't be with anyone else, which I'm guessing was his way of saying that he'll need sex from Harry pretty consistently to keep his sanity. It'll be interesting to see how that goes. I'm also eager to hear about the reactions from Ron, Hermione, Dumbledore, and especially Snape. One thing, though- if Draco's so vulnerable to sexual intentions, will Harry ask for him to be moved out of the dungeons? I can totally picture some Slytherin trying to take advantage while Draco's sleeping or something. Not to mention, with the requiring sex thing, he may need to spend more time with Harry in general.

I love you, I love this, don't wait so long between chapters! >.<
Update again soon!

~Hazel
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh you know what I'm gonna say! I sooooooo need chapter 8! Why does it feel like something just happened and I know I missed it! Draco just said he wouldn't let anyone else touch him. But he can't stop Voldemort.
person Elphaba
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter! Sorry about your loss
person Renae
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story way more than I should! Your dialog is so fantastic! The little quips are too cute! Do you ever wonder is Tom Felton or any of the other actors read this stuff. I mean, how weird would it be reading a story like this knowing people are picturing you in it!?!?! HaHa. Wow... that's kind of a hot, naughty thought right there...
**grins**
Keep up the amazing work! I'm stuck at the dorms over Spring Break and Harry and Draco are my entertainment!

"I mock you with my monkey pants!" -Oz
person Renae
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh and can we please have some kissage already!?!!? You little tease!
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww they're sooo cute!!
i cant believe Lucius would do something like that...well i can and i just wanna ring his little neck for it.
Poor baby, Draco, I'll take care of you!!
i wonder how Hermione's gunna feel when she finds this out, and then she'll prob put 2 & 2 together and figure out that Draco's been the one makin messes all over the school..lol ^_^
i wonder what Harry doesn't know...hmm *thinks* *Shrugs*, idk guess i'll just hafta wait and find out!
you know i love reviewing u story, cuz i can just talk and i know you'll respond, if not every time but a lot of the time. I like that. I should start responding to my reviews!!
WEll GREAT CHAPTER, as per usual!!
can't wait for the next one!!
-Kyle
PS-Sry bout ur grandmother.
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow. It's getting kinda romantic. o.o I would have never expected such adevelopment after I read the first 4 chapters ^^ but it's a really nice turn of events. but somehow Harry is a bit dense in the end of the 7th chapter ._. but that makes it all the more interesting for the chapters which are still to come... ? mhhhh, was that correct english? I doubt it. But anyway I totally love this ff and I hope I can continue reading soon ^^
person Tac
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
POOR DRAKEY!
I *love* the dark twist! You hooked me with smut and then gave me angstangstangst! I'd like to be constructive but I won't say anything - your writing style is beautiful! Dark, seductive, and perfectly structured! A few typos throughout, but nothing to take away from the story. Keep going! Plot or smut, I can't wait for whatever's next! I'll give you a barrel of cookies! and chocolate frogs as well!
person Ecks
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am really liking this story! I can't wait to see what happens next!