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by Smuff

person HazelWolf
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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... also, let me know if you looked at those recs. XP

~Hazel
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
woot! i love updates!, and i am sorry for your loss, its hard. but about the story, i see what u mean about maybe just coming to an early ending but i look at it like...it ended that way, because if this were real life, they wouldnt have wanted to leave, but knowing they had to...they would. and to them it would feel like it was just over, idk...do u follow? because of the way u wrote it, with them hinting about how they really might feel....that gave the story a "feeling" a "feeling" that no one would ever want to end...so when it does(because everything must at somepoint) it didnt feel natural....idk..im rambling lol...sorry i dont have any witty comments lol, next time though i promise...ut i did LOVE the chapter....a nice brake from the wildly hott sexy animal sex/fondiling we had been enjoying....but really u need to get this plot thing checked out...its starting to get really serious...who knows...if ur not careful u could move from hard core porn to pure romance...:shudder: scary :-D
person Nikte
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about your grandma, sends you a big hug xoxox
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow. when i first started reading i thought it would be one big smut-fest of a story, but now the plot thickens!!! it's getting so exciting.
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
im really sorry to hear about your grandmother. but i loved the chapter! i can't wait for more!
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
of course Harry's *missing something* that something being Draco's feelings for Harry, honestly why are men so dumb *smacks both Harry & Draco*, sorry, it just makes me mad when men can't express themselves, do they think they will die or something, ok so now we know that Draco's being dosed with some potion to crave sex, *good thing for Harry then* but how....perhaps they could get one of the house elves to taste all Draco's food first, LOL *sex craved house elves in Hogwarts*, good chapter though
person Ecks
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is so great! I can't wait to see what happens next!
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Squeils, jusps around holding special SMUFF BOX OF TISSUES now named Smuffy* New chapter new chapter new chapter! YAY! You're the best this was just sooooo good! And Draco sooooo cute! And Harry has to be sooooo blind why can't he see that Draco sooooo loves him and that they sooooo needs to make sweet sweet luve long into the night! Or untill Draco can't sit for a month.
*Holds up recipe of extreamly good cake* Send me a mail on lofabe@hotmail.com with directions and I will send you sinly delissous cake recipe.*wiggels eyebrows*
Muwahaha! *laughs evily* My evil plan of making all the smutt authers fat so that they can just sit down and write SMUTT all day is working! Smuffy we're going to take over the world!
*After extremly long monlgue over how she's gaoing to take over the world, inwolving vibrators, buttplugs and sugery cakes returnes to computer*
Yes back to something not really so evil, I'm go glad that you liked my poetic sreek of gineusness! I rock! *does V signe with a pose*
And I wold love to go home with you! *Starts packing a bag* Me, Smuffy and the delissious cakes will come as soon as I take out the Rasberry, chese, chocloate brownie I made out of the owen, another step in my masterplan.
Untill the next smuttingly geniously chapter that I saw in my reddikilusly huge cristale ball you will produce in the near future, I hope that the forece of a million fangirls reading yaoi will be with you!
xoxoxo Stella M.
*Walks in to the sunset singing Shake that ass Harry, shake that ass Harry comeon yeah!*

person Dezra
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This sounds like a complex problem, how long do you plan on this story being? I love it but I hate to see Malfoy suffer through this too much (with anyone other than Harry)
person Kermit
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to hear about your Grandma!!! I can't wait for the next chapter, as I am really enjoying this story. Take care and update soon!!!!