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*gets a nosebleed and blushes* holy cow!! that was hot! even the other chapters!! i would've reviewed eariler but it was like 2 in the morning when i started to read. i love this story and the different sides of harry. it would be interesting to read it from Draco's POV and what he thinks of Dom Harry and what happens with the other characters. i love Dom Harry. never read one in a long long time. but yours is the best!!! i love it!! can't wait to read more!!

Delicious! I think chapter 3 is my favorite (library sex!), but it's still all so good. And the emotions are played out wonderfully and the dirty talk is actually SEXY. Usually when people try to base a fic off of dirty talk it just ends up sounding rediculous, but this was terrific! Can't wait to read more ^^

I love this story. Compliments!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Seme is yaoi term for the one on top in the relationship. The one on the bottom is called Uke. :)
About the nosebleeds they were too many to count!
But this chapter just rocked my world! H.O.T! And Harry's determination there at the end when he really showed Draco who he belongs to! I was like! "Oh, yeah you tell him!" Draco needs to know that he's clamed and taken. Maybe Harry could give him a collar in a future chapter, that'll be so hot!
And I loved it when Draco youst yelled! "HARRY POTTER IS FUCKING ME!" I do hope someone heard that would be fun!
But Harry really have some carnal deciers! I was like singing "You and me baby ain't nothing but mamals but let's do it like they do on the discovery chanel!"
Oh I'm getting over excited here!
Just update and I'll send you some cookies and a "Your story rocks" greeting card.
Love Stella M.

So i reviewed on the first chappie, but then didn't come back to the site for a while...plus i've been like addicted to this other story, that has like 40-some chapps so i've been reading that non-stop, but to my surprise and joy, there were three more chappies of this and i almost *squeed...lol
these chappies are AMAZING...i love your harry and draco, and their relationship with each other!!!
i CANNOT wait until the next update...this story is just sooooo good. i love their personalities and how they react to each other so well and its just ... ^_^ GREAT
great story
great chappie
cant wait till chappie 5
-Kyle

I have a confession to make. Ever since yesterday when i found your story ive been checking if its update like every few hours.. lol... man i squealed like crazy when i saw that you updated so quickly. lol!yup I am totally obsessed with your story. god its freaken hot i cant stand it and i get so hot and bothered... my boyfriend is gonna end up loving you pretty soon for that XD hahaha anyway... aw harry cares for draco and he's all cute and possessive teehee. Gosh harry was adorable when he told draco he would be his and only his and he was for sure not sharing :) also... when the hell are the gonna kiss! its kinda funny... i always go crazy waiting for the sex scene but no that happens straight up but i have to wait for the crazy mind blowing (im just assuming) kiss. very evil of you for postponing that. so please update soon and im pretty sure everyone's reviews will inspire you yet again cuz im sure most people cant help but proclaim their enthusiasm for this story so keep it up! xoxo

WOW! OK very dark Harry, but there is a part of him that wants to be tender, it shows itself at moments, he certainly became concerned when Draco thought he was bleeding & at the demanded Draco show him healing spells and he definitely didn't like the idea of *sharing* Draco, we need to see more of this side of Harry, cause otherwise I think he will definitely do irreparable damage to Draco's soul, cause you can tell Draco wants this to be different with Harry. But I love this story, its nice to see someone write Harry so dark cause its there even if its usually buried deep. I think Harry could really fall for Draco, he just needs to let the tender feelings out a bit more.

I read this chapter in the middle of a school library and I must say I had a few awkward moments when people sat next to me on the bench I was on and I felt like they were looking at the screen.
I laugh to think they caught word like " Fuck, cum" ect. I kept nonsispiciously going through different websites and clicking quickly back to the tab to read further on when people looked away.
This was an extremely steamy chapter!! I really like the rough almost s/M quality to this story but, you can see they are just bordering on the kiss Harry isn't willing to give yet. I really love Draco's subtle confidence that prevents being repressed by Harry's dominance even just alittle bit. Like, knowing he is a fine peice of ass and Harry better like it; even though he is submitting.
I can't wait until you "idulge" me on the fingering bit and I anxiously wait for the next update; hopeing it was as fast as the last.
::hugs back::
I love authors that respond to reviews!

I hope at some point Harry realizes that he's acting as sadistic as a deatheater at some point. I love the fic, but not sure I like the bastard without a conscience Harry at the moment.

Wow! So, is Harry starting to care a little. Seems like it. That was amazingly hot!!!