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February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting take on a marriage law story, and I like it! Haha, I can't wait for more! :-)
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February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Draco's Paranoia is hilarious and had me laughing out loud, for some reason when he mention his best exit from the restaurant would be the window by Astoria, I couldn't stop laughing. I especially love how he keeps thinking how he could use Astoria as a shield or weapon, this is a fun Draco to read.
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April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi Vashka!
Thank you for this wonderful start of a marriage law fic! Even though I don`t have much experience writing, I have tons of readers experience and this is definitly the best start for one I`ve read so far. I especially liked that you left out all the other regular cliches like Hermione not having bushy hair but rather curls and secretly looking fabulous, and Draco being secretly in love with her since the ball, that would just be so shallow. Also the start with the blood tests promises a new approach. Are they going to test which pureblooded bloodline needs fresh blood?
I guess I also should thank Ravyn to help this story along.
Oh by the way, I absolutely loved Merlins Embrace!
Please, please continue this story!
pukana
Thank you for this wonderful start of a marriage law fic! Even though I don`t have much experience writing, I have tons of readers experience and this is definitly the best start for one I`ve read so far. I especially liked that you left out all the other regular cliches like Hermione not having bushy hair but rather curls and secretly looking fabulous, and Draco being secretly in love with her since the ball, that would just be so shallow. Also the start with the blood tests promises a new approach. Are they going to test which pureblooded bloodline needs fresh blood?
I guess I also should thank Ravyn to help this story along.
Oh by the way, I absolutely loved Merlins Embrace!
Please, please continue this story!
pukana
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very promising! I enjoyed the stuff about the crosswords, a nice little touch, that!
Looking forward to reading more.
Looking forward to reading more.
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February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yes, the marriage-law story line is over-used but so seldom done well! I like the beginning of your story. I hope you continue it.
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February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's a good start. :D
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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
interesting start, I have to say that it is different from the other marriage law fics, and i really cant wait to see where this goes. keep up the good work and update soon, and burning hunger as well, merlin i love that story.
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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's an interesting start so far--please update again soon! =)
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February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I love these kind of stories! I can't wait for more!
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February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice chap... yes marriage law fics are very cliche, but you are doing really good i enjoyed this first chap..a lot of the others start off with a lottery of sort or a clipping in the newspaper but i really like the mystery behind the mandatory blood donation... great writing i enjoyed this chap it was seamless!!!! of course i am a sucker for dm/hg