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for Batty

by doyoueverwonder

person anncee
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hehehehehehe very nice! i loved it!
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sooo Sweet!! Love it!! Had me smiling the whole way through!
person neelix
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! that was BRILLIANT!!!!! Well done!! I loved it....
person Anon
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a nice uplifting snippet just before bed. Enjoyed that a lot.

Lu
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I adored this. I thought it was cute how they were sharing similar thoughts and neither of them knew it. It was also great that someone saw fit to act because if those two were left to their own devices, they would never act on their mutual attraction. Good job, do it again anytime you like.

-luvsev