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for My Best Enemy's Baby

by caseyjarryn

schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wowza!
What a story!
You have to update soon. I'm hooked line and sinker for this one.
Lucius is completely rotten.
person kazfeist
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, you've certainly made Lucius into a villain! To have killed his other children....I don't think I've ever seen him accused of doing such things in any other story. Very callous. Can't wait for the rest of the story. :D
schedule February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter, I hope Narcissa cleans Lucius out. I would totally kick his sorry butt. Can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Go Narcissa!
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Go Cissa! I just love her! Can't wait for the next update!!!
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No, 'Cissa, don't divorce him. Turn him into a slug and sprinkle salt on him.
person LyeLye
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
In the first chapter where he slams her against the wall, he drops the fire whiskey smashing it. Then when they were done having sex, they are drinking said fire whiskey, unless theres a second bottle in the equation. Just saying its a major typo on your part.
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
go Narcissa! im so happy draco and hermione are sharing a bed now...that should be interesting
good chap as always..please update soon
person kittycat30
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a bastard!!! Isn't there some kind of castration hex Narcissa should be using?? Please??? So, I wonder what will happen at bedtime - can't wait!
person LuciTM
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lol. Narcissa's letter to Lucius made me laugh... kinda like a hyena. My roommate gave me this look like she thought I was on crack. Kudos to you. It takes a lot to make me laugh out loud at something I read. :3

And Draco sleeping in Hermione's room? Hmm... I smell potential. XD

Love it.

xoxo.
luci.