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for My Best Enemy's Baby

by caseyjarryn

schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this story is getting better and better. i love it. i hope you post the next chapter sometime soon. i am looking forward to reading it.
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was very funny.. light ... Keep them coming
person kazfeist
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are, of course, avoiding the obvious: Cassiopoeia, which shortens to "Cassie" quite nicely. :D
person Anon
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Frisky little buggars, aren't they? LMAO - LOVE IT!!

Love that Narcissa has a backbone in this story too and yeah, I could quite easily see her staying around for when the baby is born or suggesting that they move in with her. I wonder what's going to become of that?? I have a feeling Lucius isn't going to let her go that easily. As for them fighting over the names. LMAO - Talk about flashbacks. I'm sure they'll agree on a name eventually.
person miller14
schedule March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love it!!! i'm contantly on the edge of my seat. can;t wait for more!!
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finally they say it!!!!!!!.. I just hope that Narcissa take charge on Lucius, he deserves all the punishments that your imagination can do... Keep them coming....
person kittycat30
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Perfect! They finally got it right! No awkward conversations later, right? Unless Narcissa heard them...
person LuciTM
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So when I started reading this chapter, I had a peice of pizza in my hand.
Halfway through, I dropped it as I squealed uncontrolably at their admissions of love.
And I'm at work
which means that I TOTALLY got pizza sauce all over my client's carpet.
I'm hoping if I move the desk over it, my supervisor won't notice.

Anyway, loved the chapter,
loved the love,
loved the love, if you know what I means. :3

love.
luci.
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person kazfeist
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful update...hopefully all will be well, now. :D