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for My Best Enemy's Baby

by caseyjarryn

schedule April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
it is a good story, but i like ron far more then draco and it kind of suck to have him being such a jerk
person LoveAndHeartbreak
schedule December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, its very entertaining... so far ^^
I'm anxious to see if Draco's parents really do get divorced, or not (personally, I hope they dont, but I understand if that's how the story goes).
I'm also looking forward to more gatherings with the friends; I love how they all interact with each other :)

Looking forward to the next chapter!

-L&H

schedule November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just came across your story. You have a very nice story here. I'm totally curious to know what will happen next.
Love your Draco -I'm not very thrilled 'bout Lucius though. Anyway... we can't have it all, right?... will he redeem himself in the end?.. a bit?-
u_u

And I always like a nice Narcissa. She's so... dunno... I like her!!!
I really want to see how the divorce thing goes on?.. and what about the delivery... ohhh! not to mention the name that they will be picking... HAHAHA the twins... I loved their lists...LOL

XD

Anyway: keep on with the good story!
*winks*

Cheers & my best regards!

~ kay dalle ~


person kazfeist
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was glad to see this was updated! Can't wait to see about all the other developing relationships you've detailed: Ron/Pansy, Blaise/Luna, Lucius/Narcissa, as well. :D
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG..... FINALLY YOU UPDATE!!! YAY!!! I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. BUT I WISH THERE WAS MORE. PLEASE DONT DONT WRITING!!
person Anon
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Squeeeeeeeeeee! I'm so glad you finally had some free time to update. I know it's hard to be motivated at times when you're so busy with real life (curses real life).

OMG Fred and George with their list of names, I just about fell off the chair laughing. And I loved how cordial Blaise was to Hermione and polite Pansy was. Wasn't quite expecting the latter. Can't wait to find out what trouble she's having with her family and how everything will turn out regarding her obvious feelings for Ron either. Definitely worth the wait, my dear. :)
person dragon37
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm usually a Lucius lover, but I do believe he is all time bastard in this story. Can't wait to read more.
person Citten
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
okay the ending with draco was beautiful and perfect. sometimes there is nothing else to do but just to hold and love someone. So i 'loved' Fred and Geroges list ;) (well that statement is partically teasing and partically true.) well ron is just and real pain in the ass isn't he? though not to be too insentitive but at the same time i do kinda like the idea of the them naming the baby Quinn Belinda---that way she is the smart & Beautiful serpent, which is really cute and i rather like it. :) it really fits in a way. besides would it be really funny if she was sorted in to gryindor she would be the snake in the lions den :) hehehehehehe (sorry i just could not reist!) so did you find you notebook? i also do hope that you wont be that long in update the next chapter i really have missed the story! :)
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That Ron is such an immature little wanker! Someone needs to kick his butt into line. Narcissa should squeeze Lucius till he bleeds and I will never forgive her if she forgives him for murdering their children and grandson...the pig!

Update soon!
person Jen
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This what amazing, I do hope you write more of it :)