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for My Best Enemy's Baby

by caseyjarryn

schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was much better the second time (yes, I was reading it ffnet but thought I would go over it again. :-)) with me added to it, to fix things properly. lol Can't wait for more of the story. Thank you hon!
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy Shit!!! That damn Lucius!! Good chapter though!!
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*takes a shocked breath* *looks at screen incredulously*
You didn't just do that! Oh my goodness, that is SO horrible! Please update soon, I can't believe you're leaving it at such an evil cliffie!
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am not sure I want to review this chapter, I think I will withold my oppinion until next chapter to see if Lucius tries to scare Hermione and Draco or if he actually kills the child. If the latter, don't wait for another review, I will not read anymore.
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! please please dont stop now!!
love the story though! but please more!!
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo!!!! OMG! Lucius effing Malfoy is going to dieeeee! That is such an unfair cliffie! Update, as soon as humanly possible, please!!
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Update soon! I want to know what happens lol =P
person izema
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gosh this story is really good i hope you can up date soon

~love iz-e-ma RR
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*GASP* I knew lucy was and is a crazy, but beautiful, man.....but to abort a baby thats just sick.She said she could of fell in love with draco.....isnt that enough for the heirachy?
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
noooo he cant do the pleasze say mione blocks it ... please please update soon .. later for now

angel