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for My Best Enemy's Baby

by caseyjarryn

schedule February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please be Narcissa who kick Lucius butt!!!! This was simply lovely...
schedule February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I need another chapter!!
schedule February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
=[ poor Hermione and Draco

and ron! grrr that evil git.

i loved the ending of the chapter =] the awkwardness lol awww

Please update soon
schedule February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well at least you have a reason. I just found it strange how it seems that just by chance (or probably not) every single one seems to have chosen to get rid of the boy. I would have loved to see a little boy too, something about them is just so sweet. Haven't been too fond of girls, or I should say the average girl, since one of my classmates (in elementary school, long time I know) decided to pull the 'I'm so cute and sweet. And made of sugar and spice and stuff' and convinced a teacher to punish me when I got upset that she ripped up my classwork and screamed at her. Anyways, overly long story short, I would have loved to see a little boy as well. Oh well, Hermione doesn't seem like the treat my daughter like a living doll type so her kid should be cool.

It's nice of Harry to try to let go of old animosity for Hermione's sake. Too bad Ron can't grow up and do the same. I hope one of them walloped him good for that stupid comment.
person Anon
schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yep, hate Lucius as much this time as when I first read it. Oh he's so going to pay. I hope you put him somewhere where he's forced to watch his granddaughter grow up in a loving, caring environment while he's left there to rot.
schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know what I will like. That Narcissa kick Lucius butt after he tried to get rid of Hermione's babies, or better yet a full front with Narcissa, Molly, Harry, and the rest of the family. That could get scary but he deserve it...... Please don't be a stanger update soon..
person ancheto
schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm still reeling from the shock of Lucius throwing a curse, and now you drop another bomb with twins?!?! Gosh you're good! I did not see that coming at all.
This is a great story, more please =)
schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, I have to admit, I liked the bit where HarryGinny4eva pummelled Lucius to goo. XD

This chapter had me crying. :( Poor Mione and Draco. I'm glad that they will still have one baby, but I'm so sad that they had to lose their little boy. Damn that Lucius. You should seriously consider penning the worst imaginable death scene..EVER.. for him. Make him suffer!
LOL. Bloodthirsty a bit, I am.
Can't wait for more.
person Lexy Malfoy
schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm really loving this story. I've just read all 8 chapter in one go and I can't wait for the next update. Damn Lucius for making her lose one of the babies.
schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please tell me that there will be legal repercussions to Lucius!