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February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My computer is down so I couldn't review the last chapter, but I love the way your going with this story even thou they had to lose the little boy that he wanted, but all in all it seem to me that its only going to make them closer. Keep it up.
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February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this! Poor Hermione & evil Ron!!! Great story!
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February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
whew that's quite a bite to take in and certainly very sad! I'm curious to see if Lucius will go to askaban.
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February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
If only J.K Rowling could have seen it that way, I certainly agree about Draco and Hermione they really are my favorite couple I treat them as solid and sure as I do Harry and Ginny. I liked all the connections weaved through the chapters like George and Fred and how they felt about the situation and I think you did a really good job with ron!
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February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I was torn when I read about Hermione losing her baby boy. I do love that they're having a girl and that Draco is staying by her side though. I hope the boys or somebody comes up with a good solution of giving Lucius what he deserves. I say hex his hair off then move on to more nefarious acts. Oh Ron, when is he going to learn to keep his mouth shut? Git. I can't wait for following chapters!
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February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
okay i love this story!!!! i totally love that you have not made them like instantly falling in love with each other! i could totally kill lucius and i am a very sweet and gentle person! (side note he is going to totally hate himself later i just know it ,and he should too.) the good old weasleys! EXCEPT RON! can we just dig a hole for him now? i do like the way you have portrated the malfoy family so far too. i really love how you had draco acting in the hospital he is starting to truelly care and they are going to be great together! :) i do hope that another chapter is coming soon! i will do my best to review after each time i read! :)
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February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, you've succeeded where most have failed and actually got me interested in and reading a het story. I haven't read too many of those in the HP Fandom, or in any fandom really. Still have no real interest in the genre or the pairing, but something about you're story and how you've written the two together appeals to me.
I do have one question though, why does everybody always kill the little boy. I can not tell you how many almost twin stories I've read where there was one girl and one boy, and in every one they kill the boy. Is there some kind of subconscious hatred towards the male species going on that I don't know about? Because in every story, across fandoms... I just find it to be the strangest thing. Does nobody want a little boy to survive?
I do have one question though, why does everybody always kill the little boy. I can not tell you how many almost twin stories I've read where there was one girl and one boy, and in every one they kill the boy. Is there some kind of subconscious hatred towards the male species going on that I don't know about? Because in every story, across fandoms... I just find it to be the strangest thing. Does nobody want a little boy to survive?
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February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lucius should go to Azkaban, no doubt about it, and if you could make it illegal to be plain stupid, Ron could share his cell and they could spend their time ranting on how it is a grand idea to kill children in their mothers womb.
No matter what happens next with the Malfoy family, nothing can change the fact that Lucius killed his grandson, and everytime he and/or Narcissa (if they ever does)get to see Dracos daugther, the knowlegde of her brothers murder will always be there.
There is no room for forgiveness for Lucius action, absolutely none! Neither can Ron blame all his stupidity on immaturity and jelousy, he made his bed, he has now proven what a lousy friend he is, and even worse human being for saying that the murder of a child was a grand idea. (I am aboslutely not making this into a debate pro/agains abortion, my oppinion is that only Hermione and Draco had the rigth to make any decissions, and Lucius did kill a much wanted baby!)
No matter what happens next with the Malfoy family, nothing can change the fact that Lucius killed his grandson, and everytime he and/or Narcissa (if they ever does)get to see Dracos daugther, the knowlegde of her brothers murder will always be there.
There is no room for forgiveness for Lucius action, absolutely none! Neither can Ron blame all his stupidity on immaturity and jelousy, he made his bed, he has now proven what a lousy friend he is, and even worse human being for saying that the murder of a child was a grand idea. (I am aboslutely not making this into a debate pro/agains abortion, my oppinion is that only Hermione and Draco had the rigth to make any decissions, and Lucius did kill a much wanted baby!)
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February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ron is a pig... Never liked that rat-bastard.......
TOTALLY LOVED THIS CHAPTER THOUGH! OHMYGOD!! It was so sweet the way Draco is taking care of Hermione; Sticking up for her, comforting her, and being all snuggly cute with her. I loved what Mione told Draco, about him being better than Ron. She's sooo right. :) Yay. Can't wait for more. Thanks for being so fast updating, too!
TOTALLY LOVED THIS CHAPTER THOUGH! OHMYGOD!! It was so sweet the way Draco is taking care of Hermione; Sticking up for her, comforting her, and being all snuggly cute with her. I loved what Mione told Draco, about him being better than Ron. She's sooo right. :) Yay. Can't wait for more. Thanks for being so fast updating, too!
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February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo you can't let Lucius get away with that! And the Weasleys better be giving that Prat Ron a come-uppance!