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for My Best Enemy's Baby

by caseyjarryn

schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful, I cann't wait for Narcissa to kick Lucius Malfoy butt.... That will be lovely and extremely funny..... keep them coming still watching reading and reviewing...
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story i really do. However, I thought it was a little ridic that you brought "twilight" into it.
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
rotflmao! Cedric!

I don't know about Narcissa... she IS a slytherin. And it seems like she might already know what Lucius did. But Draco seems to trust her enough to let her know that Hermione is still pregnant and let her know where they live. He must trust her not to tell him. Risky business. Getting a bad feeling about it. Yikes! I'm afraid Lucius will go after her again. A pretty scary possibility.
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
amazing cliffhanger, i really appreciate the idea with twilight advertisement in the tv...

please carry on, cannot wait how are things going to be

=^.^=
schedule February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved it....happy v-day
schedule February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know, the premise is good, the dynamics between Hermione and Draco are very believable in my opinion (ust is believable, attraction is great, situation would actually work irl). Lucius Malfoy, although more tolerant of Hermione's situation than would probably be in canon, is very sinister and his actions were ruthless and cold blooded. I totally buy that he would curse Hermione, especially with his political leanings. I keep coming back to this story wondering what you'll do with it.

Everything meshes, imo, except I'm having trouble wrapping my mind around Hermione being independently wealthy and living with the Weasley's-- especially after what Ron had done to her. What is the reason? There might be a good one, but I keep getting distracted by the fact that she's living as a burden on Arthur and Molly (Harry is, too...) when she could get a place with Harry or on her own. I would think that Ron's situation would be awkward, and she's inviting guests into someone else's house and it's causing problems and she doesn't seem to mind. It just seems so inconsiderate to punch out Ron at his mother and father's breakfast table. Are she and Harry helping pay the morgage or something? Just trying to figure it out.
schedule February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ron he always put his foot on his mouth lol.... Don't be a stranger .... Keep them coming..
schedule February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was amaing....i feel so bad for them...rons an ass
schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww, thats so sweet. They are adorable together. Of course, I still want Lucius to burn for this. Please?
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schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story, so far. Keep updating! :D