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for Siege Mentality

by Lomonaaeren

person Fallen_angel1129
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ah its always a nice treat when our boys find out their feelings for one another :)
person DTDY
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow those "creatures" are interesting.
And draco created them.
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad for this latest development. I had wondered, when Draco saw pain in Harry's face/eyes, if he was able to see Harry as himself again. Really glad that he did for at least this small moment. Oh, and I'm not sure if I was clear, but I'm rather glad that it as just a "keen detective mind" and not magical. Great chapter. Really interesting that Draco can incorporate make believe places to into this wild magic of his.
person Fallen_angel1129
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AHH! that was such a TEASE chapter....your tease you.....-_- update soon lol!
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow! i never would have thought that! good job! freaky creatures though
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story and very original, don't believe I've ever found something similar to this and I cannot tell you, how much I look forward to the next chapter! :D
person Fallen_angel1129
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
cant wait for the next chapter!
person Mangacat
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Huh... Intersting... The way those two interact and how they think about and perceive each other, that's really cute and endearing. Wonder where Draco will put them now...
Cat
person minn yun
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yes! we finally get a not-quite-pooh illusion-bear!harry from you. thank you, we love the story too hard we're going mental for a while.
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
(btw, just letting you know: rec'd Changing of the Guard)Arg. Right. Sorry, I meant Black not Malfoy. You clearly wrote that in the last chapter. In any case, really interesting. I liked the small taste Draco gave of how he saw Harry: something like a bear. And that is really intriguing that Draco didn't hear the other Aurors (if they are indeed the creatures that Draco thought were chasing him, and the creatures aren't someone else), and only heard them snarling, when he can recognize Harry's voice. And Harry's "ability" to jump into the minds of other Death Eaters...is it magical in nature? Or just a keen detective mind? I really enjoyed Draco and Harry's interaction in this chapter. That aspect is definitely turning out smoother than I had expected. Again, very interesting chapter.