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for Broken Normalcy

by Flamesky

schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this just keeps on getting better and better.

I was aware that Draco was Egan, but I never thought that things ran that deep. I am so upset over what they did to Harry and Draco, but mostly Harry. I hope he doesn't take them back as friends and doesn't forgive them. I hate when people have them commit grave wrongs to Harry and all of a sudden they are buddy buddy again. As if they never hurt him.

And then you have the kids to think about.

Lots of stuff going on here, I am loving the story so far!
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy smoke! I soooo need chapter 7!!! What will they say? What will Harry do? Sooooo need more!
person kissimi
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love this sory please update sooooooonnn i need to know whats going to happen
person murderaid
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, you just keep surprising me :o and i would of just assumed they were all goody-too-shoes or something. but this is shocking. poor harry wound up between all these lies.
person tiggator
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, I must say. As much as I KNEW those children weren't his and I was very angry with Ginny, I can't be all that upset with her anymore. Wow, I didn't even think about them being Draco's. I just figured he had known she cheated. Ahh! But how can I fault her for that, when they were just seeking comfort? It's Ron and Hermione who I just can't believe!!! So, no more "Grr" for Ginny, although I still think she should have told him. But now it's Grr to the others. Poor Harry. You were definitely right about more emotions coming out. Can't wait for more. :)
person tiggator
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
haha Okay, so I just read Chapter 4 again, and now it makes more sense. I had remembered first reading that chapter and wondering "fresher in his mind?" knowing it had some sort of hidden meaning, but it just sort of slipped my mind. haha You're good!
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would be very willing to beta this fic because, quite frankly, it needs it. I LOVE the story but the grammatical errors are killing me. *heart heart*
I'm nice and friendly, but very honest and thorough when it comes to editing. :)
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg i love this story! please please hurry with the update :)
person murderaid
schedule February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i just started reading this today, and i'm so gripped by this story. i love your wrighting style and i really feel for each charcter, even Ginny who i dislike, you manage to make her even likeable. i would of never thought Egan was a fake haha, i assumed he was just some guy to keep Draco occupied. The misletoe bit is a squee moment. i really cant wait for the next chapter.
person murderaid
schedule February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
sorry about the typo above . oops.