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"Oh. My. Sweet. Merlin."

THANK YOU TO CHARLES for saying exactly what Draco was thinking about Hermione. I can't believe Draco would ruin her evening like that - what an asshole. She looked beautiful and he behaved like a beast. I hope she keeps her new "look" - maybe modified but keeps it all the same. Well - how is Draco going to get out of this one?

Wow! I read the first two chapters just the other day and then I saw it here with all eight! Yeah! This is fun, flirty and fantastic! I love the way you are writing them and I look forward to more really soon! Thank you! HG4eva

I love your story. I laughed a lot. What a great idea. I can't wait for the next chapter.

i liked it a lot!

Hermione needs a little makeover and not to change herself but to update her look, there's nothing wrong with taking care of yourself by looking your best and wearing clothes that fit. She sounds weary and resigned. Ginny and Luna need to kidnap her. Hell, dare I say it, Hermione could use a few tips from Pansy maybe. Again, not to be a fashion plate or change herself but learn to enhance what she has and wear age-appropriate clothes that show off her assets.

I LIKE Charles. He's perfect to help unveil Hermione's true beauty - again not to change her but show her off to her best. Oh, yes, I think Charles is a perfect answer to showing the world that she's not plain or dull.

Now Draco, oh he's convinced himself of the words he work to Charles but that was to keep Hermione at bay. I think he felt safe if she were what he thought - he wouldn't consider men competition. I think deep down he was happy she was alone because that meant that if he couldn't be with her, then no one could. But now, oh, I think he's bitten off more than he can chew. Can't wait to see what Charles has in store. I like him.

I still hope Hermione does a bit of taking care of herself: new hair style, a touch of makeup, better styled clothes...oh YES. I think alot more men will be taking a peek at her. And Charles is so devious. How did he guess that Draco liked Hermione? Was it the description a subtle message meant to keep Charles at arms length and not too interested in her?

Oh how fun! Update soon dear.

He'd rather have her be with Weasley, and that was saying something!! HA! I love it..I can't wait to see where you take this.Poor Draco I almost feel sorry for him...

Hello! Didn't you put this up, at another site, with another penname? I specifically remember Charles Whitmore being the guy Draco asked to date Hermione. If so, I can't wait for the rest of the chapters. It's finished, from what I remember, right? :D

i think i remember this story from coloured grey!
hey! this is an awesome story!

unfortunately, i couldn't check the rest at coloured grey now... its revamping.