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by saritat9

schedule February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm just laughing right now...I don't even know what to say. That was quite a twist on the traditional "talk". LOL
person ancheto
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow that's a cliff-hanger and a half!!! haha go hermione!
great chapter =)
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Oh Merlin, no." Oh Merlin, YES! ROFL.

You have a unique and very refreshing way of writing. I love it. I love the picture of Hermione eating ice cream in her dress though I think I would have slapped Draco and walked away. She let him ruin her evening for now reason - the jealous idiot.

I continue to love Charles - he's awesome.

That scene with Isabelle was so funny. I totally picture them lying next to each other looking up at the ceiling in utter disgust and shock. On to the next chappie.
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL - great last line....what will Draco do now?

Like a sister, pfshaw! Right, if she's like a sister than he's a perv! :-)
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I laugh a lot with Draco's little problem that was very very funny.... Please keep them coming...
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story. Can you e-mail me when you update? Peace.
person ancheto
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh the drama! Haha how very..Malfoy of Draco to behave like that! Poor Hermione.
What a great few chapters, this is a really good story, well done!
Looking forward to more!
Adriana
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this story has me rolling in laughter...I love seeing Draco's reaction. his comment about her not supposed to be sexual was hilarious. it's like his mercury meter is steadily rising and rising and rising...LOL, it's going to BLOW!
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"and then..and then...then Draco would rescue her from the Weasel. A perfect plan." ROFL!

First thing first, Draco describing how to kiss a woman was melt-worthy -- mm mm good! Kiss me kiss me kiss me!
Ron is an idiot, why is Draco helping him? And I was so happy that Hermione realized she cared for Draco - now again, she needs a bit of updating it sounds to me so why is Ron doing the makeover?

Can't wait for more...on to the next chappie.
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The one-liners are KILLING ME - no really KILLING ME! LOL