rate_review Reviews

I would have really loved this story if it didn't perpetuate and focus on virginity myths.

1) the myth that the hymen is a solid barrier that breaks (it isn't) and that's what constitutes virginity (it doesn't). As a physician, I feel the need to point out the hymen is a flexible ring of tissue that has nothing to do with virginity

2) the Madonna / whore dycotomy in a wife.

Yuck on those

Charlie Whitmore is officially on my list of favorite OoCs. He was an absolute delight!

Wonderful story. Couldn't stop reading it. Did have a few sections where I couldn't keep up with or figure out who was saying what line (predominantly a conversation with Ron, Harry, and Ginny) but otherwise very well paced.

Thanks so much for writing.

So fluffy, so sexy, so witty! You really rock at writing dialogues, I laughed many times while reading your lovely story. I almost didn't read it at all, the title making me fear something too OOC and too far from the good old Dramione. I'm glad I gave it a try anyway! And it's not so AU, Herm. even still wears her Hogwarts skirt ^^

Okay so I'm only into chpater two but this is too much fun to wait until I've read everything. I'm loving it. I love that Draco and Hermione became friends first and act like girlfriends or guyfriends and have someone to talk to without realising their sexual chemistry only needed a kickstart to get things going and after Hermione's date with Charlie (oh I bet Draco's kicking himself now) Draco got less of a push and more of a shove. I'm curious to know why Hermione really agreed to such a thing. LMAO I have to get back to reading so I know what happens next. :)

All done and that was just too delish for words but I'll find some anyway. I loved the whole 'game' of it all, how they kept going around in circles not realising how the other felt about them until Charlie clued them in and pushed them together. And I must say, Draco did a lovely job of properly de-flowering her. Hmmm, I think I'd like to meet this Charlie of yours too. ;) What a character he was. LOl Well done, brilliant,fun read.

My fave line: He'd take it slow...ish! ROFL! Dear goodness, that Draco can make your knickers wet by just looking at you! This was so fun, the story was refreshing, witty and down right enjoyable. Thank you.

-Cheers- This was a good ending to a good story. I'm glad I wasn't the only one who saw Charlie as gay/bi. If you were to write a Charlie/Neville slash fic I would totally read it. Just a suggestion ;]. Peace.

haha, I just read through all 15 chapters at once :o)
Great Fic!! I'll have to read your other stuff as well, although Im not really a fan of harry smut, but Ill give it a go!!
xoxo

This is soo cool and it went so fast.... Please keep writing other fanfics maybe a triad with this two and Harry or Blaise. Those could be fun.

Wow! Draco finally got it together! I adore this story!