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by AislingSiobhan

person faith b
schedule February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooohhh i love this fic
please continue soon I cant wait for more!!
I think that Harrison let Legolas off lightly for locking him in the caves though! Please update soon
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great fic, can't wait to see more.
schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey, i loved this story!!!!
it seems to me that you've put alot of thought into this story,
aka the plot is really good! XD
your grammar is great, there doesn't seem to be too many spelling errors, (i noticed a few but i don't remember which chapters they were... ^-^')
and the story is great!!!
i can't wait tos ee what happens next hun', keep up the great work!!!
p.s. i looooved the lemon!!! XD
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is interesting. I will be honest, I didn't think I would enjoy it but I am. I hope for more soon.
person Jynkers
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm only on part 2a/3 - The Two Towers, and I'd probably read more if I weren't 11:27am, and I had gotten any sleep last night.

Anyway, I absolutely love it so far. I don't often read crossovers, and I've only ever read on LotR crossover - and it wasn't my favorite. I actually found this fic via your author page, because I really liked Melanin and wanted to know what else you'd written.

I'd go into more detain, and tell you exactly what I liked about both stories (and even in separate reviews!), but my head is spinning a little and I'm having difficulty spelling things right (yay for spell check). Anyway, I'll definitely be reading more of your work - you're style is much better than that of many published authors' I've read, and I'm actually really excited to read more.

Anyway, I'm not sure how this post got so long - forgive me if I'm rambling (I'll just blame it on the sleepiness in my head >_>).

Thanks for the awesome story!

PS, I'm adding this to my alerts on FF.net, so I'll know when it's been updated - I read so many different things, it's often hard to keep up without the lovely FanFiction.net - though both are being added to my bookmarks ^_^
person HikariAi
schedule February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Totally AWESOME. I really really LOVE this story.. ^_^ Update soon, ne.. ^_^
person Jan
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story!

Please update chapter 3 soon ^_^

Jan
person HikariAi
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very very good and exciting... ^_^

PLEASE update soon, ne.. ^_^
person Anon
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would love to read more!
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
legolas did have great hair, lmao.

I likes your story! Though parts of it creeped me out...*shudder* it always creeps me out when old people 'desire' youngins... unless its like, a hot 300 year old vampire or elf or something *drool* :D Cool story :) can't wait for the rest :P