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for The Morning Star

by varnalesa

person alchino
schedule September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very good story
please I dont want severus to choose harry as king
person kerosecstacy
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No! NO! You can't just have poor Sev raped in the previous scene and then not fill in the gaps... OH GHOD!!! WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!
*ahem*
Yes, brilliant, great story. Can't wait for the next update.
person misswarchan
schedule March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a very interesting chapter. I really enjoyed it! Please update again soon! ;D
person abbicee
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit I'm getting a bit confused about the whole legend thing and how it applies to Snape. I suspect I'll have to read it again several times before it starts to make sense. Maybe I'll have to read a bit about the whole Twelve Kingdoms thing. While it's your story and you should take it where you desire, I will say that LV/SS is one of my least favorite pairings so I'm hoping you won't take it there, or at least that's not how it will be at the end. Still, it's your story so you must do as you feel right. Is there a rescue in sight for Severus or will it be a while yet?
person misswarchan
schedule March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update! Very nice, I'll be looking forward to the next as well! ^-^
person evanone
schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Snape. Cuteness is bad for his (mental) health. Hope to see more
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Falls out of her chair laughing*
Oh that's just too rich. Poor, poor Sevvie... Soooo pretty.... n.n Wonderful. Please update soon.
person abbicee
schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Drat. When did they put the magic contorted words in for reviews? Anyway, I'll try again. I like the start you have though I'm not very familiar with The Twelve Kingdoms as I don't watch a lot of anime. However I do love Snape and especially Snape creature fics. I can't wait to see what kind of creature Snape is and what Voldemort's plans for Snape are and here's hoping for a rescue by Dumbledore.