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for The Morning Star

by varnalesa

schedule January 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7 needs serious reediting, looks like the coding got messed up. otherwise this is good and I plan on reading the rest of it
schedule May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ok the past few pages have been amazing but you should proof read before you post. Apparently the page isn't loading correctly and your codes are showing below is an example of what I mean.Otherwise, the story is amazing and I'm enjoying it

style='mso-ansi-language:EN-US'>The golden trio was sitting on the couch in the
Room of Requirement playing exploding snap.
schedule September 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This fic was starting to get interesting - are you planning on continuing it in the future?

person alchino
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you started updating this fic again.
person Alea Black
schedule February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am completely in love with this story. I love every little thing about it. I can't wait to read more! I'll keep checking back for updates.
person lonelyreverance
schedule December 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love the idea! have waited for something like this for a long time can't wait for more
person anon
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Might want to add a N/C or rape warning in the summary, instead of springing it on us halfway trough the story. Did not read on. Pity.
person Blackmutt
schedule December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful! I'm completely at lost for words, that's how good your story is. I look forward to your next update!
person evanone
schedule October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you started updating this fic again. I hope to see next chapter soon.
schedule October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I just stumbled upon this story for the first time and I'm really enjoying it. You've done an excellent job with this. I love the pure panic that Snape is going through. I'm also enjoying the blossoming relationship between Draco and Hermione. Keep up the great work. I'll be looking forward to where you go with this.