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for It Was Only A Kiss!

by jemlia

person The Lazy Snake
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Rather than being happy about the happy ending, it just makes the book seem more bittersweet.

I loved this story, though. I especially loved how you took time to develop their relationship. And of course, the way you personified Peter. Most people make him out to be a loser, more of a stalker than anything, but he was their friend and he had character too. I'm glad you think that too.
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol
person Juana13
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AW! I'll really miss this fic. I absolutely loved it!!!!!!!!
: )
a sequel maybe?
probabably not. hehe
but anyways, glad you wrote this. looking forward to another story written by you!
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha!!! YES!!!

That was a triumph of an ending.
Fantastic job all around.
Keep up the great work!
person knj4k4
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And they all lived happily ever after and no one went to Azkaban or got killed. the end.
person Anon
schedule April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE. It's been forever and I'm dying.
I need another chapter. Not just want, but NEED.
person knj4k4
schedule April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
0.o that was the hottest thing....*fans self* *dies*
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW, that' all I can say! I just finished reading all 19 chapters and WOW! You had me from the first paragraph! And what a GREAT sense of humor you have! A gay werewolf! Hahahha Anyway, this story is amazing; I am so glad it's not over! You are an AMAZING writer! The way you describe the boys ambiguity, their developing feelings for one another; I can FEEL what they are feeling. The way they are w/each other, their kisses, it is SO romantic! What an incredible writer you are! Keep up the good work!

Lisa
person MewMew2
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. Thank you for finding the time to update once more.
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A beautiful story, wonderfully written and a pleasure to read. I eagerly await the next chapter.
Truth be told, the main reason I registered here was to submit a signed review to let you know how great a job you're doing. Please, keep up this amazing standard of work.
Best wishes,
Joey.

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